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by Mirage_GSM
Sun Aug 19, 2012 4:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Foreigner
Replies: 54
Views: 14748

Re: The Foreigner

An excercise in "How many metaphors can I cram into one chapter?"
And another case of "That guy needs to see a psychiatrist."
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Aug 18, 2012 3:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Un)broken (Emi prologue) [Updated 8/18]
Replies: 26
Views: 10819

Re: (Un)broken (Emi prologue) [Updated 8/18]

Must be nice to have a hospital where a nurse can be assigned to one patient exclusively...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Aug 18, 2012 2:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Zombie Apocolypse
Replies: 23
Views: 7303

Re: Zombie Apocolypse

Yeah, I think I've seen two or three other fics about zombies at Yamaku here so far...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Aug 18, 2012 2:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 912
Views: 596647

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/16)

I only use spoiler tags when I can reasonably assume that other persons reading my pot haven't read what I'm posting about yet. In a forum thread below the post I am referring to that is not a reasonable assumption. As griffon said, there is this useful option to go straight to the last unread post....
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Aug 17, 2012 9:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: (Un)broken (Emi prologue) [Updated 8/18]
Replies: 26
Views: 10819

Re: (Un)broken (Emi prologue) [Updated 7/22]

And there we have the answer to the question that so many people have been asking:
Emi did NOT have sex with her previous boyfriend 8)
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Aug 17, 2012 9:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 912
Views: 596647

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/16)

Why are you all spamming spoiler tags? Anyone who has read the thread to this point will also have read the story. (And if they read comments first, they only have themselves to blame.) I see no indication of suicide. In a story that is PoV of the character in question there should be some kind of i...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Aug 17, 2012 8:50 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: One Wish (Hanako, post neutral) [Updated, 10/8]
Replies: 30
Views: 25529

Re: One Wish (Hanako, post neutral)

Actually I think this stands pretty well on its own.
I'm not sure what a sequel could add.
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Aug 16, 2012 10:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 912
Views: 596647

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/16)

That's also a way to avoid resolving a conflict :roll: You know while I was reading that chapter I was getting the ffeling that I was in a greek tragedy. You know the kind, where everything could turn out right, but all the character insist on taking the single course of action that will steer the s...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Aug 16, 2012 5:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Behind my Scars [Updated to: Chapter 6]
Replies: 58
Views: 26246

Re: Behind my scars [Updated to: Chapter 3]

My eyes remain fixed on the plane as it comes in for landing, then shift to look past the glass doors of the entrance to scan the faces for my blind friend. “Lilly!” I shout, louder than I expected myself to. Seems they made it through immigration and baggage claim in record time. ..says Lilly to H...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Aug 14, 2012 7:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 912
Views: 596647

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/10)

Also, narcolepsy isn't a mental health issue, so I don't see the need to see a psychiatrist. Seeing a counselor long-term to cope with her brother's death would probably be a good idea though. Uh... That's what I meant. I don't see how a psychiatrist could help with narcolepsy anyway. Is there a di...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Aug 14, 2012 6:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 912
Views: 596647

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/10)

I don't see her condition as being bad enough to warrant being institutionalized.
Nor did I imply that.
Yes, she should see a psychiatrist.
Maybe she should take medication.
No, there shouldn't be any need for institutionalization.
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Aug 13, 2012 12:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 912
Views: 596647

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/10)

My point was that someone who is as traumatized as that should be seeing a psychiatrist for help. I'm no psychiatrist myself, but she probably should be taking medication against those depressions, too. At the start of the story it seems like Suzu is just a narcoleptic girl who suffers from nightmar...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Aug 13, 2012 10:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 912
Views: 596647

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/10)

If you've never met (or been) a high school student feeling anxiety about their future, then I simply can't help you there. There's a qualitative difference between feeling anxious about one's future and getting a nervous breakdown every time someone mentions university... I personally don't see it...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Aug 13, 2012 5:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: YourFavAnon's Various Fictions [Update 3/16]
Replies: 146
Views: 65043

Re: YourFavAnon's Various Fictions [New Story 8/12]

So Lilly wears her bra to bed?
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Aug 11, 2012 7:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 912
Views: 596647

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/10)

As much as Hisao seems to have pushed the dreams away -mostly- she continually rejects the future - ad nauseum. There's a bit of a broken record note in the way she repeatedly draws on that history, then pushes away the parts that should be opening her eyes. Now, this far into the story, she's stil...