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Let's say it this way...
It was less foreshadowy than the title of the story ^^°

I've seen neither. I was just going by your quote.

“There are those who doubt the power of Satan. The power of Satan to change men into beasts. But the ancient Pagans did not doubt, nor did the prophets. Did not Daniel warn Nebakanezer? But the proud king did not heed Daniel. And so, as the bible says, he was made as unto a wolf and cast down from ...

ProfAllister wrote:A few better ideas:
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I was just about to ignore this thread for sillyness, but this post made my day!

She sighed, “Angel broke out of his cell. Killed two students and wounded a dozen x-men on the way out. So... They have Angel at their HQ. They've known him for a long time; they know all his abilities and weaknesses. (Abilities which - according to the wikipedia article - include nothing more orig...

...and then sleep becomes me.

So an anthropomorphic personification of Sleep takes on Suzu's identity? We're getting really surreal here...

“and it’s passed someone’s bed time, anyway.”

past.

Otherwise nice story so far.

Let me just say that I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter.
Very Rinny.

So we're down to writing fanfiction of fanfiction now... Did you ask SL if he's okay with it? He probably is, but it's nice to ask. The writing itself is not bad, but a few things are very jarring. For example I don't believ Hisao would refer to his girlfriend as "the narcoleptic" - not even in his ...

Yes, those two arrows are wrong.
They must have slipped in with one of the later revisions or I would have noticed sooner.

“You’re cousin was a lot more understanding than I thought she’d be.”

"Your"

Apparently in Kenji world shooting people with an arrow is an acceptable opener to negotiations.

This sentence is in there twice.

I half expected Jigoro to BE the Deer Man...
Is this going to continue?

No, you're not missing anything.
Once you antagonize either Shizune or Lilly in Cold War their respective paths (as well as Hanako's if you side with Shizune) are closed to you for good.

I have no idea what circles you usually frequent, but in my experience, wearing a piece of clothing like that is not going to amke anyone as much as raise an eyebrow.
I think I own one myself, but I haven't worn it in a long time...

Yes, but why would you look for a bad mother rather than just not caring about that quality?

I agree that you're off to a good start. In fact you had me interested the moment you announced you would make use of some characters that aren't used so much in other stories. If you want to use Suzu as the romantic interest try not to be inspired too much by the other Suzu stories around here. For...