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I saw the first season of the anime... and I want that time back.
So sorry, but even without reading this story I know it isn't for me...

I'm glad I didn't get that prompt. My story would have been a lot shorter and ended with Hanako having to do something...

Why don't you just use "Mr." as honorific? That's how you'd address your teachers, isn't it?

Beautiful story - especially the last part. It's a nice explanation for some OOC moments that somehow aren't in light of that ending.

O...kay. That has to be the quickest to third base I've ever seen in a KS fic :lol: You might consider working over the formatting a bit. A few paragraphs would help readability a lot. Good luck continuing this, because it's going to be hard. Nice to see you're making a serious effort, regardless. B...

(Although I'll note that you ignored my correction that the plural of "Still Life" is "Still Lifes" :p)

I think that must have been in the version the internet ate...
Fixed now, thanks.

Wow, a multi-part story! Thanks a bunch :-) Looking forward to the continuation! One thing I was wondering... Do you commonly call your teachers by their last name without any honorifics? When I still went to school there were a few teachers we were on first name basis with by the end of high school...

Congrats on finishing!

Interesting premise but too early to tell where exactly it's going...

I have to admit I have no idea why the first one is supposed to be a KS Fanfic, but I liked the second one... Had to look up "copics" though...

I don't even remember reading that one, but I'm sure that back then I didn't know any more what to think about it than I do now. It's probably some kind of crossover with some vampire story, but frankly I don't care enough to look it up. I don't even think this deserves to be called a "story". It's ...

I don't know if it's because I'm dead tired, but for the first few paragraphs I had a weird feeling of déjà vu with this story... Of course the rest was most certainly unique and a fun read to boot! The only thing that I found strange was the strangely serious narrative style. If you're writing a cr...

Hi, and welcome to the forums! The story is fun, but as a practical tip you should use more paragraphs for better readability. The prompt was... difficult, but you turned it into something worth reading. If I had happened to get it I would have taken the "literally" literally, which would have meant...

Thanks!
I'm glad you liked it.

Most of it involved running into a few walls while doing research, especially regarding what third-year students go through nearing graduation. So far what I would say is the best depiction to be found on these forums is in "Sisterhood", though iIrc it takes a bit of artistic license since it assum...