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by Mirage_GSM
Tue Nov 20, 2012 6:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Complete
Replies: 74
Views: 33321

Re: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Complete

So you can score more than 100% in university in Japan?
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Nov 20, 2012 6:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 915
Views: 597595

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 11/19]

The conversation is too long to convey the time passing beteen each message. The chapter would go on forever and be incredibly boring. I guess there are people who do text message conversations that long. If I get a text message and my answer would be more than "yes", "No" or "10pm", I always call t...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Nov 20, 2012 6:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Complete
Replies: 74
Views: 33321

Re: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Complete

He had a 107% in the class, so one assignment wouldn't be too much of an issue, Uh... Maybe this is a dumb querstion, but what does that mean? ...a student whose touch turns base metals to gold, and the boyfriend of a rock star who has an entire continent made out of diamonds. Literally, an entire ...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Nov 19, 2012 7:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Language
Replies: 22
Views: 7710

Re: Language

One post - and not even a one-liner - praising the story, followed by eight posts (including mine) discussing necroing of old threads. Which is worse? Can we stop that and either let this thread continue to rest in peace or say something pertinent to the story? We have a whole discussion board where...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Nov 19, 2012 10:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Complete
Replies: 74
Views: 33321

Re: The Enemy Within. (Katawa Superpowers Sequel) Ch 15 up

...as a bullet slammed into the armor at a significant fraction of lightspeed.
Just for the record... What do you think of as "significant"?
as a brilliant black plane slammed into him point first at several thousand miles per hour.
What's the rate of acceleration for that thing?
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Nov 18, 2012 7:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Who Goes There?
Replies: 14
Views: 6537

Re: Who Goes There?

It's ..a good movie. To a lot of people.

I'm Sorry if I've spoiled it for you.
Don't worry - like I said, it's not likely I'll be watching it in... ever.
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Nov 18, 2012 4:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
Replies: 202
Views: 79465

Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]

Miya's reaction to that might be, depending on context, anticlimactic. I'd be interested what sort of resolution on Hisao's part could bring forth such a line. He'd have to know what he wants. I could imagine hisao popping that as a what-if-question - Miya's reaction to such a question would be int...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Nov 17, 2012 2:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Nonchalance (11/15 - Chapter 1 "Pilot" Scenes)
Replies: 14
Views: 4170

Re: Nonchalance (11/15 - Chapter 1 "Pilot" Scenes)

How do you lose three limbs and an eye by having a metal box dropped on their head? That's a good way to lose a head. Maybe it would account for the eye? ...I dun get it. >_> I was wondering that as well... No, she's still late. She was late for her run, she's late for her nurse visit and she's als...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Nov 17, 2012 1:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Who Goes There?
Replies: 14
Views: 6537

Re: Who Goes There?

I sure hope this was supposed to be a parody. In the beginning I was hoping for a decent horror story... (Well "hoping" is not exactly the right word...) Anyway my expectations were lowered a lot at the point where you stopped the effort to write a story and switched to script format. They lowered a...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Nov 16, 2012 8:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Nonchalance (11/15 - Chapter 1 "Pilot" Scenes)
Replies: 14
Views: 4170

Re: Nonchalance (11/15 - Chapter 1 "Pilot" Scenes)

Likewise, Ryota only briefly reflected on the plane crash and only as a side-point to what he was really thinking of. Oooh, a plane crash. I was wondering about the kind of freak accident, that would drop a metal box on his head... Figured you'd explain later... About the similarities betwenn 1st p...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Nov 16, 2012 1:24 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 148707

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! 11/16 Update

The telescopic metal spear had sliced right through the motor of the minigun. It was useful as a club, but that was it. “Clever bastard,” I dropped the gun and yanked the modified M-16 off of my back. Probably would have been even cleverer to slice through Hisao's head... I fired another burst at w...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Nov 16, 2012 11:20 am
Forum: Feedback
Topic: [Plot] - EmiIII - Time
Replies: 0
Views: 3543

[Plot] - EmiIII - Time

Emi Act III - Phantom Pain / Debate Expresses Doubt Something I came across while translating... I know it's a bit late^^° Phantom Pain: emi "Can we at least get onto the bed? It's my first day back on these things, and I'm still readjusting." Debate Expresses Doubt (the next day) "Her running has g...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Nov 16, 2012 7:36 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Nonchalance (11/15 - Chapter 1 "Pilot" Scenes)
Replies: 14
Views: 4170

Re: Nonchalance (11/15 - Chapter 1 "Pilot" Scenes)

You know, it's not an especially long gap between the statement and its explanation. And generally if you're wondering about something while you're reading, it's a good idea to keep reading to see if something nearby answers the question, as it often tends to. That said, I have a question: Do you t...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Nov 16, 2012 5:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Nonchalance (11/15 - Chapter 1 "Pilot" Scenes)
Replies: 14
Views: 4170

Re: Nonchalance (11/15 - Chapter 1 "Pilot" Scenes)

I'll say nothing except that you should re-read the quote you quoted when you were talking about my third-person perspective thing. Sure, but that line comes two paragraphs later . By that time I had done all my wondering and dismissed it as "probably unimportant" It's primarily a third-person limi...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Nov 16, 2012 5:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (Updated 11/1/19)
Replies: 583
Views: 390662

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 11/15)

I think Rin's character is open for a pretty wide range of interpretations.
I'm not sure even Aura "gets" her completely ;-)
So while this interpretation may be an unusual one, I don't think it is that much off the mark.