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Nice pieces. Too bad they both end when it just got interesting...

Oh, and in this case, one negative decision is "too many".
Cheers

Well, it does...
Except maybe for part V - I'm not exactly sure what the significance of that dream is supposed to be.

BTW, your version of Miki is very interesting. Too bad she was only a side character in this story.

OtakuNinja wrote:

Xanatos wrote:(Also, I continue to mentally pronounce 'cpl_crud' as 'cripple crud'. I have no idea why and it makes me feel bad.)

I do that too!

I always thought "cpl" was short for "corporal" but to be sure, you'd have to ask him yourselves.

It's going to be done when it's done.
Do not expect it soon though, progress is slower than I had hoped.

...As far as fan works go, sure, why not. Interestingly enough, there only seem to have been three serious fan attempts at an actual Misha route. (I haven't found any others, but your Google-Fu may be stronger than mine.) 1) DrSciencePhd's Route (Completed) - Extremely short in comparison to the ca...

Excellent writing like always.
If I may ask, what made you choose Suzu for that part over all the others?

Probably nothing much, since there haven't been any updates since August and I've not seen the author around either.

I already understand your position on branching pathways in prose format stories, and I understand your position on "pseudo-route" type stories. That's something that we'll simply have to agree to disagree on in this case. I didn't object to your use of a story branch - well I do in principle, but ...

I admit I've been looking forward to updates of this, but you should write at your own pace as long as nobody is threatening to withdraw a paycheck

Also like you mentioned, without saying too much, please do keep in mind that a storyline branch has occurred. While storyline branches are a valid (please note I didn't say "neccessary") tool in Visual novels, in a prose story you have to keep in mind that the story has to make sense all the same....

It's surprisingly hard to find a well written source for this... When one of the possessors in a compound possessive is a personal pronoun, we have to put both possessors in the possessive form...: Bill's and my car had to be towed last night. Giorgio's and her father was not around much during thei...

Hmm... I think you are switching perspectives a few times in that story. The problem is, I don't know where exactly you do it. There are several lines in there where I'm not sure who's thinking what.
Except for that it's a nice one-shot.

I fail at english so bad right now...

Usually you don't. That's why I was so surprised at "I's office"...

Well, I hope there will be more mystery and less shooting in this chapter, but I'm used to my wishes not always coming true... ...as I sat grading papers in Kenji Setou and I’s office. Something in this sentence doesn't look odd to you? Besides, my wife made more money then me doing her own writing....