Yup. Still cute.
Thankfully this time I wasn't eating any cereals...
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- Sat Jan 12, 2019 11:41 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 573181
- Wed Jan 09, 2019 11:53 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Shizunes Route Analysis, 7 Years Later
- Replies: 8
- Views: 4104
Re: Shizunes Route Analysis, 7 Years Later
Huh? "Sabotage" is quite a strong word. To even consider anyone who put this much time and effort into a project deliberately trying to sabotage it is kind of way out there... And frankly it someone really wanted to sabotage a project there would be way more efficient ways to do that than using run-...
- Wed Jan 09, 2019 9:38 am
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Shizunes Route Analysis, 7 Years Later
- Replies: 8
- Views: 4104
Re: Shizunes Route Analysis, 7 Years Later
Yes, that life goal she's set herself is not something she only realizes in her good path - it's just that only in that path does she tell Hisao about it. It's a bit corny, but at the very least it is an attempt by A22 to make Shizune more sympathetic and likeable, so that alone disproves the opinio...
- Tue Jan 08, 2019 6:33 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Dec 25th, 2021: Disconnection)
- Replies: 133
- Views: 45324
Re: Crafty's One-Shots (Dec 25, 2018: Project Blue Curtain [S9])
Okay, it took me a while to get to read that with so many other stories appearing lately, but it finally happened, and... man what a ride... This not only deserves its own thread, it has easily taken its place among my top ten favourite stories around here. I don't keep a list, so no idea where exac...
- Tue Jan 08, 2019 4:59 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Shizunes Route Analysis, 7 Years Later
- Replies: 8
- Views: 4104
Re: Shizunes Route Analysis, 7 Years Later
Okay, there are a few glaring mistakes - like Misha coming to Yamaku "to be with Shizune" or "contemplating suicide" - and a lot of omissions, especially in the description of the paths after the choice point... And given how insistent the maker of this video is to prove his point I can't help but t...
- Mon Jan 07, 2019 9:51 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Reunions (S9 Submission) (Updated 2/4/19)
- Replies: 11
- Views: 4441
Re: Reunions (S9 Submission)
I agree, it's really good for its length.
As for criticism, the first part switches wildly between tenses, which is strange since the second part is perfectly okay...
As for criticism, the first part switches wildly between tenses, which is strange since the second part is perfectly okay...
- Fri Jan 04, 2019 1:38 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route [Updated 8/17/19]
- Replies: 24
- Views: 10023
Re: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route
Very nice!
You probably shouldn't have given away that it's about MIsaki. That would have been a good twist for later on...
You probably shouldn't have given away that it's about MIsaki. That would have been a good twist for later on...
- Fri Jan 04, 2019 11:53 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Winter's Blossom (Updated 8/13/19)
- Replies: 12
- Views: 5292
Re: Winter's Blossom (An S9 Submission)
Well, there are still eight stories outstanding, so you're far from the last...I want to apologize for this being so late,
About the story itself: Wow, your Ikuno is almost bossier than Shizune
- Thu Jan 03, 2019 4:41 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Yamaku's Swimming Pool
- Replies: 274
- Views: 70099
Re: Yamaku's Swimming Pool
It's going to have water. Lots of it.
Jokes aside, your guess is as good as ours.
I don't think any of the devs ever gave any kind of serious thought to a throwaway line from the novel like that.
Jokes aside, your guess is as good as ours.
I don't think any of the devs ever gave any kind of serious thought to a throwaway line from the novel like that.
- Thu Jan 03, 2019 1:07 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#71—'Returns')
- Replies: 322
- Views: 178240
Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#55—'Clubbing') (S9)
Ah okay, for me it looked like some particularly weird kind of Russian...
- Wed Jan 02, 2019 2:38 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#71—'Returns')
- Replies: 322
- Views: 178240
Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#55—'Clubbing') (S9)
Interesting and confusing...
That one guy/girl talks with an accent even in his/her internal monologue? Even when it's told by a narrator sometimes?
That one guy/girl talks with an accent even in his/her internal monologue? Even when it's told by a narrator sometimes?
- Wed Jan 02, 2019 2:15 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: The Great Yamaku Holiday Bake Off (S9 submission)
- Replies: 6
- Views: 3076
Re: The Great Yamaku Holiday Bake Off (S9 submission)
Well, that was fun!
Why did he shout if he didn't think Misha was already back?I didn’t think Misha would get back before I did
- Wed Dec 26, 2018 9:40 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection
- Replies: 53
- Views: 31411
Re: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection
And that was my story. Please tell me if it was any good or not, look forward to my big project in the works for here, and have a very happy new year. Peace to you all, I'm gonna overdoes on Advil and sounds of the ocean to try and sleep now. -Brister XD First of all: Welcome! I think it was a good...
- Tue Dec 25, 2018 10:18 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection
- Replies: 53
- Views: 31411
Re: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection
Okay, it could take me some time to get through Crafty's story, so for now: Rooftop Repartee: Nice story, though I always feel sad when Nomiya is portrayed that way :cry: All I Want For Christmas: Hmm. Honestly I was expecting it to be Iwanako. You did a very good job disguising the target of his af...
- Mon Dec 24, 2018 10:37 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Downix One Shots
- Replies: 4
- Views: 3145
Re: Downix One Shots
That was enjoyable. Not really the Christmas Spirit, but really fitting for Halloween :-) One small typo(?): Who m ever it is, must be in that classroom. And of course your usual formatting problems ... Not much of a problem for a short story like this, but I'm not sure I would be able to get throug...