Search found 5561 matches

by Mirage_GSM
Sat Jan 12, 2019 11:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573181

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20190114 Revenge & Ice Cream)

Yup. Still cute.

Thankfully this time I wasn't eating any cereals...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Jan 09, 2019 11:53 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Shizunes Route Analysis, 7 Years Later
Replies: 8
Views: 4104

Re: Shizunes Route Analysis, 7 Years Later

Huh? "Sabotage" is quite a strong word. To even consider anyone who put this much time and effort into a project deliberately trying to sabotage it is kind of way out there... And frankly it someone really wanted to sabotage a project there would be way more efficient ways to do that than using run-...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Jan 09, 2019 9:38 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Shizunes Route Analysis, 7 Years Later
Replies: 8
Views: 4104

Re: Shizunes Route Analysis, 7 Years Later

Yes, that life goal she's set herself is not something she only realizes in her good path - it's just that only in that path does she tell Hisao about it. It's a bit corny, but at the very least it is an attempt by A22 to make Shizune more sympathetic and likeable, so that alone disproves the opinio...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Jan 08, 2019 6:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Crafty's One-Shots (Dec 25th, 2021: Disconnection)
Replies: 133
Views: 45324

Re: Crafty's One-Shots (Dec 25, 2018: Project Blue Curtain [S9])

Okay, it took me a while to get to read that with so many other stories appearing lately, but it finally happened, and... man what a ride... This not only deserves its own thread, it has easily taken its place among my top ten favourite stories around here. I don't keep a list, so no idea where exac...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Jan 08, 2019 4:59 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Shizunes Route Analysis, 7 Years Later
Replies: 8
Views: 4104

Re: Shizunes Route Analysis, 7 Years Later

Okay, there are a few glaring mistakes - like Misha coming to Yamaku "to be with Shizune" or "contemplating suicide" - and a lot of omissions, especially in the description of the paths after the choice point... And given how insistent the maker of this video is to prove his point I can't help but t...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Jan 07, 2019 9:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reunions (S9 Submission) (Updated 2/4/19)
Replies: 11
Views: 4441

Re: Reunions (S9 Submission)

I agree, it's really good for its length.
As for criticism, the first part switches wildly between tenses, which is strange since the second part is perfectly okay...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Jan 04, 2019 1:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route [Updated 8/17/19]
Replies: 24
Views: 10023

Re: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route

Very nice!
You probably shouldn't have given away that it's about MIsaki. That would have been a good twist for later on...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Jan 04, 2019 11:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Winter's Blossom (Updated 8/13/19)
Replies: 12
Views: 5292

Re: Winter's Blossom (An S9 Submission)

I want to apologize for this being so late,
Well, there are still eight stories outstanding, so you're far from the last...

About the story itself: Wow, your Ikuno is almost bossier than Shizune :-)
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Jan 03, 2019 4:41 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Yamaku's Swimming Pool
Replies: 274
Views: 70099

Re: Yamaku's Swimming Pool

It's going to have water. Lots of it.

Jokes aside, your guess is as good as ours.
I don't think any of the devs ever gave any kind of serious thought to a throwaway line from the novel like that.
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Jan 03, 2019 1:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#71—'Returns')
Replies: 322
Views: 178240

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#55—'Clubbing') (S9)

Ah okay, for me it looked like some particularly weird kind of Russian...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Jan 02, 2019 2:38 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#71—'Returns')
Replies: 322
Views: 178240

Re: Alt Dreams [One-Shots] (#55—'Clubbing') (S9)

Interesting and confusing...
That one guy/girl talks with an accent even in his/her internal monologue? Even when it's told by a narrator sometimes?
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Jan 02, 2019 2:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Great Yamaku Holiday Bake Off (S9 submission)
Replies: 6
Views: 3076

Re: The Great Yamaku Holiday Bake Off (S9 submission)

Well, that was fun!
I didn’t think Misha would get back before I did
Why did he shout if he didn't think Misha was already back?
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Dec 26, 2018 9:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection
Replies: 53
Views: 31411

Re: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection

And that was my story. Please tell me if it was any good or not, look forward to my big project in the works for here, and have a very happy new year. Peace to you all, I'm gonna overdoes on Advil and sounds of the ocean to try and sleep now. -Brister XD First of all: Welcome! I think it was a good...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Dec 25, 2018 10:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection
Replies: 53
Views: 31411

Re: Secret Santa 2018 - Story collection

Okay, it could take me some time to get through Crafty's story, so for now: Rooftop Repartee: Nice story, though I always feel sad when Nomiya is portrayed that way :cry: All I Want For Christmas: Hmm. Honestly I was expecting it to be Iwanako. You did a very good job disguising the target of his af...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Dec 24, 2018 10:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Downix One Shots
Replies: 4
Views: 3145

Re: Downix One Shots

That was enjoyable. Not really the Christmas Spirit, but really fitting for Halloween :-) One small typo(?): Who m ever it is, must be in that classroom. And of course your usual formatting problems ... Not much of a problem for a short story like this, but I'm not sure I would be able to get throug...