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by Mirage_GSM
Tue Jan 01, 2013 10:37 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Painless, Scarred and the Broken Heart (Updated 12/13)
Replies: 35
Views: 14711

Re: Painless, Scarred and the Broken Heart

Well, Gustav's parents are obviously foreign, but Hayden is also a strange name for a Japanese. If he doesn't have a foreign backgound as well, you might consider remaning him. Also, his recklessness seems a bit over the top, at least in this first chapter. Even if he doesn't feel pain, he obviously...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Dec 31, 2012 6:54 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Favorite girl.
Replies: 955
Views: 235057

Re: Favorite girl.

yummines wrote:when did Rin become so popular...?

oh well, fine with me.

Rinbro master race
This poll was hacked years ago.
I wonder why it's still up...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Dec 31, 2012 6:14 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)
Replies: 912
Views: 596647

Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 12/31)

Well, the first half was the most enjoyable part of this story since months ago - and I never thought I'd say that about a chapter including Kenji.
The secon half was more or less the same as before, right? That's (one of the reasons) why I think branched paths are not for prose stories.
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Dec 31, 2012 5:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Searching for a Certain Someone
Replies: 31
Views: 13939

Re: Searching for a Certain Someone

I can put it beyond reasonable doubt that I've found Hanako, but I can't be sure if she's trying to confirm who I am. Not going to reiterate everything I've said before. Nevertheless, it looks like we're both doing the same thing,... He introduced himself with his full name when he first came into ...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Dec 29, 2012 7:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 148707

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! 12/29 Update

...once both of you are dead, I will be able to rule a new Illuminati,...
Somehow I can understand why being told "drop your weapon and I'll kill you" will engender less compliance than "drop your weapon or I'll kill you...
I sighed and asked, “We have to stop it, don’t we?”
Why?
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Dec 29, 2012 11:28 am
Forum: Feedback
Topic: German Feedback - Rückmeldungen zur deutschen Übersetzung
Replies: 76
Views: 45277

Re: German Feedback - Rückmeldungen zur deutschen Übersetzun

Hallo und danke für deine Rückmeldung.
Was das Folding angeht: Schau mal hier.
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Dec 29, 2012 5:57 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: [spoilers] Hanako X Emi, eroge X anti-eroge?
Replies: 25
Views: 8015

Re: [spoilers] Hanako X Emi, eroge X anti-eroge?

I don't notice any "incorret implications" in his posts.
I loved the realistic way Emi's path played out. He found it unsettling... I guess it can be that as well, especially the bad end.
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Dec 27, 2012 6:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A One-Shot Collection of... Elements? (revived 04/04/2013)
Replies: 33
Views: 9345

Re: A Possible One-Shot Collection

That (and the next three pictures in that folder) are crane games from the Aeon Mall in Narita.
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Dec 27, 2012 4:40 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Locations?
Replies: 28
Views: 9761

Re: Locations?

The city scenes are indeed mostly from Sendai, with some shots taken in Ueno, Tokyo. ... Do you remember which BGs are from Ueno? I've been there and even took a few photos , but I didn't see anything familiar from KS. To be honest I didn't expect to find any there in the first place, so I didn't l...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Dec 27, 2012 4:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A One-Shot Collection of... Elements? (revived 04/04/2013)
Replies: 33
Views: 9345

Re: A Possible One-Shot Collection

Comrade wrote:http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=JejiJ-RgLVc
A video about how cranes work
That link only works for mobiles, but I found the corresponding video anyway.
Seems hardly neccessary to rig those machines, seeing how ridiculously difficult it is to pick this stuff up anyway...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Dec 27, 2012 4:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS-EVANGELION (2012)
Replies: 20
Views: 8548

Re: KS-EVANGELION (2012)

So yeah, expound on your issues with eva but do try to tie it back to the story offered here,... That' exactly where I have problems. There aren't any characters from NGE, the only things the stories have in common is that they are piloting giant robots called EVA and everybody dies. I don't have m...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Dec 27, 2012 4:06 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 148707

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Updated 12/26

I'd say he's more surprised that the villain knew his name.
If he knew about Kenji, why shouldn't he know about Hisao as well? The two run a detective agency together - they're not hard to link for anyone with access to the yellow pages.
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Dec 27, 2012 8:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS-EVANGELION (2012)
Replies: 20
Views: 8548

Re: KS-EVANGELION (2012)

So if you didn't like NGE much for the messed-up characters and the unnecessarily meticulous efforts in presenting a believable world to begin with.. the mind-altering part probably wouldn't get to you. I didn't like NGE partly because of the messed up characters . Shinji My main gripe is still the...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Dec 27, 2012 8:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A One-Shot Collection of... Elements? (revived 04/04/2013)
Replies: 33
Views: 9345

Re: A Possible One-Shot Collection

From what I've seen of Japanese Arcades, they are at least 75% Crane Games or that variant where you drop tokens in and hope something will be pushed over the edge. Real "games" are actually quite rare. And I'm not sure how any computer can calculate whether something will be caught by the crane or ...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Dec 27, 2012 8:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Conclusion? Update
Replies: 317
Views: 148707

Re: Hisao and Kenji- Master Detectives! Updated 12/26

So he enters an office building and starts throwing grenades around unprovoked? If Kenji had been mistaken with the adress... And isn't it nice that the villain can hold a civilized conversation with his prisoner with gunfights and explosions all around him. Why is Hisao surprised that he knows ther...