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Hmm, I can't remember reading any stories quite like that on these forums... Anyway, very well written. And if you consider Lilly is planning to go to Scotland, her bitch-rating increases tenfold. There is a lot of potential for this story - way more than just a three-parter. For example it would be...

Dream wrote:And the feeling of "anyone can die" certainly help to give a very tense tone to it.

I get that feeling from every story just by reading the name "Doomish" as the author...

First of all I suggest you look for a proofreader. I guess English isn't your native language, and there are too many things to correct to do it all in this thread. Next, try not to have your character experience all the exact same things that happened to Hisao. Try to be more original. Another thin...

And, finally, a picky detail-oriented question: How can someone look down a fully-buttoned-and-ribboned Yamaku blouse? It The Italian "sex workers" count is estimated, by a research commissioned by the Equal opportunity Department of the Italian government in 2007, to be about 45,000. The percentag...

Also congrats on the first anniversary.
Have some cake!

I heard a few months back that Raita mentioned KS somewhere, but from just that I wasn't even sure he read it...
Has there been any further reaction from him since then?

I don't think the "Eternal debt of gratitude" will be material for anything else but comic relief.
And as far as conflict goes - After Emi's second act you wouldn't have thought much could go wrong either...

Doomish mentioned in his OP that this story would be extremely OOC for Hanako, so I restricted my comments to the setting.

Thanks for that recommendation. I'll be sure to check it out.

Karen turns around to face me. "Don't go getting any ideas. If you run, they'll find you, believe me. Not too hard to spot someone as burnt up as you in broad daylight." It's also quite easy to just give the police the adress of the establishment and have them take them all in custody. Problem solv...

It only included Act 1 if I'm not wrong? How is that supposed to be an accurate reflection of KS as a whole? It's not, but that didn't stop people from forming opinions. If you're interested check out some of the older threads here in the forums (basically all those from 2011 or earlier). Or you co...

It's not essential listening for comprehension of the story, merely what I was listening to while I wrote that scene. People are welcome to listen or not listen, and like or dislike as they please. I for one never follow any links without at least a short description of what I'm going to find there...

Good to see you haven't given up on this, but... that was the single most unromantic love confession I've ever read. "My life was getting boring anyway, so sure, why not go out with you?" ^^° Also, please keep in mind the difference between "then" and "than": "Good afternoon Hisao. I hope you're fee...

Welcome to the forums. The writing is a bit rough around the edges, but nothing a bit of practice won't fix. A few minor pointers: - The main part of the story is present tense, but a few times you slip into past tense. - You try a bit too hard to foreshadow the coming conflict. (Even beyond the tit...

Carighan wrote:Thanks, that's as expected then, makes for good comic relief after the pretty heavy scenes beforehand. ^_^

Comic Relief? I thought it was the most realistic H-scene I'd ever seen in VNs for - in Hivemind's words - "inexperienced teens trying something new for the first time"