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Megumeru wrote:Sendai is part of Tokyo. Make a stop at Ueno or Kawaguchi and find them :p

No.
Sendai is more than 350km north of Tokyo.
Aura said some shots were taken in Ueno which IS a part of Tokyo, but he didn't specify which shots.

As far as I recall Silentcook has never objected (or expressed his displeasure if it was there) when someone posted in an old thread as long as the poster had something meaningful to say.

I wasn't sure at first either. I thought either my monitor was giving up the ghost or my eyes were playing a trick on me - I just noticed there was something strange and it was giving me a headache...
Had to quote the post to see the code.

So please don't do that.

While your writing is good and mostly free of mistakes, the backstory of your OC has to be one of the most ridiculous I've read on these forums so far. I got the first bad vibe around here: Name: Frank Martin a) Character bio b) Another OC who goes to school in Japan Then he "travels around the worl...

Somehow I doubt Emi would be the type to perfume her love letters - let alone notes like that one.

Also, while I usually encourage writing short chapters instead of 10K+ word chunks, yours redefine the meaning of "short".

From what I have gathered, most other "games" in this genre lead more toward sex as the goal instead of the experience and learning about the characters. No. A lot of them are, but there are also a lot of VNs of other genres. There's a thread here in the forum about recommendations, so you shoud br...

Would be an improvement imo.

First order of the day: Drop the colours. I was beginning to doubt my eyesight when I thought to check on the code of your post^^° Other than that your writing seems neat and free of mistakes. Not sure yet what to make of the changes you promised. I assume you have a reason for making those, so I'll...

Very interesting chapter. Except for this passage: "A friend of yours called the school. I think Aoki was her name. She was fairly persistent, urging me to get in touch with you." Sumi? She must've gone looking for me when I didn't show up for class. Well, that's a relief. There's someone looking ou...

I forget, didn't it at one point in her route mention Lilly was on birth control? Specifically the blindfolding scene? She does mention it. Right after Akira tells them to always use protection. She says she wasn't going to leave these things up to Hisao to handle. Yes, and there are implications o...

I know they say "write what you know" but giving your OC the same condition you are suffering from yourself is probably a bit much of a self-insert... The thought that someone would leave England because Japan is supposed to be better for disabled people made me smile a bit. :D I will be sending my ...

Suspension of Disbelief An example from the article: Some find it strange that while some audience members took issue with the flimsiness of Superman's disguise, they didn't take issue with the idea of the existence of a superbeing whose only weakness was kryptonite. One arguing from the theory of ...

I'm not waving a waifu flag and accusing me of that doesn't add to the conversation and comes off as a weak retort, ignoring the points I made without refuting them and is the intellectual equivalent of 'NO U'. I would say these things if someone wrote a serious tale about Emi cheating on Hisao and...

On the subject of tertiaries and their fanfic screen time, Taro is actually quite popular. From my trawling, the least used characters seem to be Akio Hayashi (often mentioned, rarely given a significant role), Ritsu Tainaka (retcameo, but technically an OC), Misaki Kawana (I'm not sure I've EVER s...

I don't think I follow you...