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The author has already stated that this story is unfinished and will probably stay that way.
Also this.

Since when does Miki appear in the prologue?

Fact: Google Translate renders the Japanese character for "ha" (as in HA-nako) as "blister" when translated to English...So, bit of a dark joke there. :lol: Wrong. Hanako's name does not even contain the character "ha". It is written as 華子, which contains the chatacters "hana" (flower) and "ko" (ch...

She's looking at speaking to the place where Hachisame was a few seconds ago like its normal. Couldn't decide? Hachisame calls out to the armless girl starring into the store window. It's either "staring into" or "starring in". Given the context, I think the former is more likely ;-) Again a few li...

Probably either Emi's funeral scene or Rin's bad end - it's been a while by now...
Hanako's good end scene in the park should be close behind.

I don't know if it is a typo or am I misunderstanding something... It's a misunderstanding. The "Then" was meant to signify that I was moving on to the next point of my post not that the travelling took place at a later time than his stay in Japan. Also, the airline thing stays. I like the idea, an...

Dawnofthestorm wrote:So Aura himself wrote Rin's path?

Fixed that for you.

I'm sorry to say that, but your dialogue is just... unnatural? Take this for example: “Its been great, people are so nice round here, I've met a bunch of people.” “Ohh any in particular?” “Well Hisao's nice and so is Hanako they are in my class, plus Emi's really great to be around.” “Well it was so...

What is actually even more astounding is that there is a straight girl in a story by Kosherbacon...

That's probably because Moekki drew them.
And just for your information: Moekki is Shizune's character artist.

And Lilly does go to Scotland in Shizune's route. That why she's at the Hakamichi house when Hisao visits. Last farewells and such before the trip. If you get Shizune's bad ending, you have a brief talk with Lilly in the tea room sometime after everyone comes back from the trip to Shizune's house. ...

”Of course I'm okay with you being a lesbian. As long as you don't have the hots for me. WAHAHAHA~!”

Reading this story again after the release of KS, I find this line doubly amusing.

1. Read through the story again, please. It clearly states the character is from Estonia. Uh... Yes? Did I imply anything else? In fact I have no problems at all with him being from Estonia. Just the genreal overuse of the "foreign student" trope. 3. Why would he have no money? Which kid running aw...

Apart from getting a proofreader you should make a habit of making reality checks once in a while. For example: Lilly and Hanako lead the way but I notice something strange that I didn't notice before. Hanako is holding Lilly by the arm really close and Lilly’s eyes are closed which means one thing ...

Emi's, Hanako's and Lilly's arcs end before the summer holidays in August.
Rin's path ends shortly after... probably in September
Shizune's path ends in march of the following year.