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NelNinja wrote: ↑

Sat Feb 23, 2019 5:33 pm

Onto Sisterhood for me, I guess, ...

Good luck and see you around Christmas

Well...
It might be flattering, if the author didn't try to sell each entry on that list on the value of its H-scenes - and if it didn't share the list with a "gem" like Grisaja... And Monster Girl Quest doesn't sound very promising either...
If my Heart had Wings might not be too bad, though.

Not so much a triangle and more of a covalent bond - one electron leaves but another is already there to take its place.*

*I know that's not how covalence works, but close enough...

“One for Aiochan, one for Mirachan, one for Aiochan, one for Aiochan…” Her name is "Aoi". "Ai" would also be a suitable Japanese name if this is not supposed to be the sidecharacter from the VN, but "Aio" is not a name. [But perhaps a bit more awake and enthusiastic than Sensei Mutou?] If you want ...

Added the latest submission by Scrathminus to the index. With this there should be four stories still missing - plus one or two that are still in progress. @ProfAllister are you going to give those four to other writers so Craftyatom, Vekter, BristerXD and PabloPabloPablo also get their prompts writ...

Okay, after the first half I wondered why you put a lewd warning on a story like that. I couldn't see how you'd get around to a h-scene from that start... And it really did not work out all that well. That development would have needed a lot more build-up than this one-shot could possibly provide. T...

Wow, a critique almost as long as the story itself. :lol: Jokes aside, I agree with most of what the Prof wrote, even though I wouldn't have thought any individual point worth mentioning. (I was contemplating rainsing the question if you can really smell if someone had sex in a room the evening befo...

This one contains some mature themes, but after a discussion with some of the other writers on this forum [] I think a specific warning may be unnecessary. I have to agree, because even after rereading that almost-H-scene a few times, I have no idea what is supposed to have happened while she... bl...

Number 31 is a badass way to cover up a chest-scar...

A shrine yes, but a chapel?

Well, let's just say, you have improved a lot as a writer since then :-) That's not to say it's a bad story. Leaving aside the grammar issues - no need to go over them for a year-old story - most of it is quite okay. You managed to paint Lilly - and even Jigoro - in a positive light without laying i...

It was all as if something out of a romance novel. IMO 90% of all "like" in any given text could and should be replaced with "as if". This is not one of them. “It will take several days, Hmm... Dying my hair never took several days for me, but admittedly I'm not an expert :-) So, I must admit, desp...

Hanako Fancopter wrote: ↑

Mon Jan 14, 2019 8:06 pm

I do think it would help a bit if it were written in paragraphs rather than line-by-line, but if it's how you write, then it's just how you write.

Sorry to disagree. That would be the same as saying 'If your writing is bad, your writing is bad. Don't try to improve.'

with a trackpad she was able to trace kanji on in addition to keyboarding. It's true that there are programs that let you do this, but I think that is done mainly when learning Kanji. In my expericene the recognition rate is quite low for Kanji drawn on a tablet or trackpad - especially for more co...

Well, at first I thought Hanako was getting a visit by the ghosts of Christmas past, present and future...
Now that would actually make for an interesting story... though maybe better with Hisao being the one visited...