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Her age is not mentioned in the text anywhere.

I do know where I linked my stories - it was just my guess that he came upon this one through the archives since very few people seem to pay attention to signatures. And yes, this story was completed before the release of the full version, so there will be a few plot points that diverge from Canon: ...

Ah, someone has gone on an archive binge
Thank you for your kind words.

Solid start. Not much to say about the story so far. A few minor things to fix: No, my parents want me to learn to be dependent. Not rather in dependent? “Kon’nichiwa!Watashinonamaehamishadesu!Anatawa, atarashikodomodesuka?” Isn't that a bit too formal for Misha? I would also like to change into the...

The Yakuza can’t afford undo attention...

undue

I can then send the information I still have stored to the police,

Why not send it right now?

Please feel free to throw around ideas for new characters, but if you want to actually see their stories, I recommend you go to the fanfiction section and start to write! As for the character the OP suggested, I don't think she would fit very well in the KS universe, because a) Yamaku doesn't admit ...

Not much to do but nitpicking... “Still impressive, though.” It actually isn't. She heard him with Misha who is in class 3-3, so it would be natural to assume he is, too. But maybe he is just laying it on thick here. And Lilly bought tea at the Shanghai to tkae home with her instead of sitting down ...

Okay, had a short look at the first two chapters. I agree with pretty much everything griffon said (that applies to the first two chapters.) Additionally: - My pet peeve: Keep your tenses straight. You're switching between past and present tense a few times. - I find it pretty unlikely that there wo...

AfaIr the devs never objected to any fan-project so far as long as you a) do not use any of the VN's assets (sprites, CGs, music etc.) b) do not claim that your work is in any way connected to 4LS and c) do not try to make money from it You should still ask, but if you follow these rules you should ...

This made me smile - several times.

You slipped into past tense a few times towards the end, though.

So do you think Miki was mistaking Lilly for Saki, or that she was expecting Saki to be at the Shanghai for some reason?
Because otherwise your theory wouldn't make any sense...

I'm still not convinced this is going in any direction at all. So far, Darknus has been writing primarily one-shots...

I like what you tried to do with Miki's reactions on the way to the Shanghai, but it kinda made me think she was setting him up (like arranging a lunch with Saki and bringing him along) more than it conveyed her crush on him. That was totally the vibe I got too. Did you mean "arranging a lunch with...

“Today’s Monday, right?”

Really? So he had to work on a sunday?

You might put down a link to the first two parts of the story in your top post, or it will be very confusing for new readers...