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I can at least get rid of some of the girly scent. I thought it was supposed to be a medical lotion? Those aren't usually scented, are they? Well, Yamaku and the village were familiar areas that she'd been visiting for years, and she was probably more used to the residents and felt comfortable ther...

She's still sleeping peacefully, her breathing slow and steady beneath a cloud of ebony dark hair. She changed her hair colour? the sun hasn't have built up a head of steam yet. You might want to rethink that sentence. But as we jog past Hanako repositions herself on my opposite side, head bowed an...

Don't capitalize after an ellipsis... you're not starting a new sentence. Uh... Yes you do. Sometimes at least. In fact in seven of these eight examples the capitalization are correct: "The first word after an ellipsis is capitalized if it begins a new grammatical sentence." So of the examples you'...

Well, seems we agree after all.
It's just that I've never heard "hit" pronounced with a "near-front/near-close/unrounded" vowel...

Dann schick mir mal einen umfangreicheren Schnippsel per PN dann stell ich das in ein Fansub-Forum... dann schauen wir mal wie gut sich damit Mitarbeiter aqueieren lassen. :D In den letzten Tagen ist mir was anderes durch den Kopf gegangen... warum ist keine der anderen Sprachen bereits fertig? Bek...

I'm sorry, I'll rephrase: "Bin" and "been" rhyme to a quite large portion of humans who use the words, but might not to some others depending on their accent. "Bin" rhymes with tin, shin, skin, win, kin, sin and gin. "Been" rhymes with sheen, lean, mean, seen, keen, bean and green. If there's any a...

-Exact same thing why Stephen King falls as one of the most hated writter . He lets his emotion get the better of him. And due to that, he has published hundred books by now. He can even create 3 novels in a single year! But if you analyzed his works, you will find that he just kept on repeating it...

Well, either there is something wrong with my English pronounciation of either of those two words (which I doubt) or the difference is so small that you have to be a linguist to hear the difference...

Wie du selbst sagtest: "das was Zeit kostet ist die Qualitätskontrolle hinsichtlich Rechtschreibung und sprachlicher Konsitenz." Und was Fansubs von Anime angeht... Ja ich kenne selbst Leute die so was machen. Eine durchschnittliche Animeepisode hat allerdings auch weit weniger Text. Wenn da die Aus...

sorry, but that's not the best pronunciation guide... a: as in blah (yeah I have great words) i: as in she u: as in moon e: could be like hello, but usually pronounced like a cross between an ay sound and an eh sound o: like moan I never claimed my examples were "the best"... With four of your five...

Well, most things have already been mentioned by Helbereth and Blackwaltz. I have to admit that I didn't even get to the Yuri part before I skipped down to the comments. If you are looking for good yuri Fics here on the forum, I also recommend Kosherbacon . However, if this is all true: Tired….im so...

Seated at the left side of the table, and dressed in some pretty flattering dark pyjamas, is the blonde amazoness, Lilly Satou.

Amazoness? Really?

griffon8 wrote:"Why does she have enough time to think there isn't any time?"

Because Thinking is a Free Action

Mirage, about your point in Miki's internal monologue invalidating the other two choices, that's actually what Hisao does if you choose "Go for a walk into town." in Sip (Part 2). The next page has him thinking, "Following Hanako to the library seems a bit intrusive. There was a reason she left the...

Still a lot of jumping between tenses, but at least this time I can recognize you intended to write past tense. Try to get rid of the present tense passages and you'll be good. Personally I think your characterization of Hanako is a bit over the top, but like I said that's just me. One comment I for...