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Mahorfeus wrote:I think Hanako's route ends sometime in July, while Lilly is still in Scotland. Apparently the school year ends in February, so graduation would be around then.

The school year ends at the End of March.

Cute. Hnnnngggg-inducingly cute. I especially liked the snowman at the end. However, I do object to one thing; A few days later, I went back to where my house had been. A few days after she was heavily burned? That's one hell of a recovery. A few days after she was dismissed from the hospital maybe...

Well, you use either a full stop or an ellipsis, not both.
Cute little story by the way.

I’ve queued up a few episodes of Gekkō Kamen and Jaianto Robo tonight. Interesting coincidence. I'm also watching Giant Robo at the moment. Can't remember any giant lizards though, and I don't think it's older than his dad, so there is probably an earlier season of that franchise.. Anyway you poste...

Personally, I'd prefer option one, and could have saved myself a lot of work by doing that, but there's an imperative about H-scenes around here,...

Really? So far I've gotten away fine with not writing any h-scenes and I intend to continune without doing so.

What I found more surprising was the combination of "misses" and "sama." Using both seems a bit redundant. The exact way honorifics are supposed to work escapes me. Honestly, though, Hisao is probably nervous and overcompensating--using both to try and sound extra humble, if that makes sense. I've ...

I had to do some digging to find the right honorific, and it seemed appropriate for his first time answering to her--I really don't like them either. Even Misha's use of -chan is hard to leave in place, sometimes. As for the Mrs. versus 'Missus'/'Misses', I tend to prefer phonetic spelling in dialo...

If only there was a way that I could communicate to the general public that I was deliberately not posting in this topic, that didn't involve posting in this topic. Well, the next best thing would be the button with the exclamation mark titled "Report this Post" SC seems to have taken notice withou...

Out of all the pointless threads you've created so far, this one takes the cake.

While I don't agree with Katt, I don't think he and Mamen are the same person. (His post has way less mistakes than the OP's)
I'm out of here before this escalates even further.
The OP doesn't want advice, so there's not really any reason for me to post anything else here.

If you read my post carefully, you'll notice that I never said Rin wasn't a normal person.
I said she doesn't normally speak like one. She does here. Without other clues she could be a second Emi...

Well, it goes without saying that the story is extremely strange, but even if we take the premise as a given, your Rin is speaking like a normal person. She's not a bit Rin-like...

Good chapter. You don't have to try so hard to give every character "screen time." Just focus on those relevant to your story. Also, please try not to overdo it with the split personalities. That will just backfire. Two questions: - Since when is Mutou teaching history? - Who is this cassiopeia you'...

Even if we disregard "scripting, grammar, ect ect.", the story just doesn't make sense. It has coincidences that are just too wild to be believable (Hisao crashing into Akira's car), irrational behaviour (Lilly's dead body being laid in Hisao's hospital room and the doctor lying about her survival d...

Well, I have to say it was pretty horrible...
I have no idea what exatly happens there. Did they die or didn't they?
I suggest you improve your English skills considerably - for example by reading - before you try writing stories in that language.