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I admit "the Rika we know" wasn't phrased optimally^^°
Still the OC in this story does not even fit the rudimentary description in the April Fools blogpost.
Not to mention that Rika is a second year - a fact that I'd forgotten about until I just checked the post.

Also, I have no idea how Mirage gathered that the character was female. I didn't notice any identifying characteristics and still didn't on a skimmed second read-through. It's just a guess - Let's hope it's a lucky one ;-) And if it turns out to be Rika, there has to be some extremely traumatic exp...

So far, I've noticed only one big and one small problem... Let's start with the big one: If her father knew about the history of heart problems in his family, wouldn't he, you know, have his daughter checked by a doctor to see if she also has it before she almost dies? And the small thing: Japan has...

It takes me a little bit longer than most people to cook than most people. That is more people than are needed for this sentence. If you don't know why, try cooking your next dinner with one arm behind your back. Yeah. Exactly. It's stupid and hard.But you have a choice in the matter. So shut up. I...

BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:

Helbereth wrote:Apparently I didn't... PM me, maybe?

You wrote "thinks" instead of "things", if I understand Mirage right.

That.
I thought it might have been an intentional pun, but since you still don't seem to have noticed, I've dismissed this theory.

to sort thin k s out. Not sure if you noticed what I was getting at... It is a sort overreaction on both of their part, but for Aiko, she's not used to having the assistance, and her mom isn't completely sure how to react--they've only seen each other intermittently for the last three years, so the...

Another character introduced at this point in the story? Peculiar... ...and it's probably taking her longer to sort thinks out. Not sure if intentional... “Alright, Kitten, just- Sorry, I'm just excited!” she says, taking a nervous step backward, and holding up her hands defensively with a look of h...

This story is not dead. It is on temporary but very extended hold, while I'm working on the German translation of KS.
I might add one or two chapters once I'm finished translating Emi's path, though, which could be sometime next month.

Best chapter so far, and that's saying something.

... threesome ending is starting to look appalling indeed =) Fixed that for you; no need to thank me. Seriously, I'll be very disppointed if Vekter stoops so low to resolve this. Anyway, I was a bit suprised by the large time skip. I thought the next few days would be the most interesting thing to ...

I'm also glad that I didn't try to explain Shizune and Lilly's rivalry. The revelation that they're cousins was the first 'Holy shit!' moment for me when I played the game. My first thought after I read that wasn't "Holy Shit" but "WTF! What's the likelyhood of two cousins with those exact disabili...

...so if anyone's still holding a candle, it must be burning their hand.

You have no idea^^°
Just a few weeks ago, some people in Greece fielded the idea to sue Germany for additional war reparations to offset their huge national deficit...

I don't think they actually do. They were just looking for a Rinny quote for a fanfiction with Rin.
That or they haven't read your other stories.

Two small nitpicks: and wonder if their flight got delayed, or held up in the air, but in both of those cases she would have called to tell me they'll be late. You're not allowed to use cell phones on a plane. but with Midori and I instead. with Midori and me... Otherwise a fun chapter, even though ...

Don't worry, that post size is nowhere near enough to break the forums. Just look what passes for a chapter in Helbereth's and Scissorlips' stories.

Oh, and:

Then, once she was air-born,...

I had fun visualizing that for a moment, then it occured to me that you probably meant "airborne"