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Hey, an update! It's a bit difficult to remember all the details of what happened before, but I'm glad you're going to continue this. So you introduced Suzu. Thank you for (apparently) going into a completely different direction with her narcolepsy than all the stories we've seen before. A few nitpi...

It's probably an older photo. The no-smiling-rule was only introduced a few years ago.

Umber wrote:

Talifan9 wrote: Maybe we can recruit some people to help make up for it?

I would pitch in if I knew what F@H was and if I could manage it.

Any help, here?

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Folding@home
http://folding.stanford.edu/

Well, it's only name, date and place of birth, nationality, adress, height, eye colour and the issuing authority - no biometrics so far
But considering it is meant to identify it's holder, that's to be expected.
Fun fact: you must not smile on the photo

I nodded and reached for the sucker, “my girlfriend has first aid training, so I should be fine.” With a sentence structure like this, the majority believes (going back to my long ago Grade 9 Personal Achievement Tests and other marked narrative assignments) that the first letter of the first word ...

Did a bit of what I'm euphemistically calling research.
Here's what I was talking about: Personal Identification

Seems Japan doesn't have them in that form either, so forget I said anything.

I don't know what kind of identity card you have, but my ID is my driver's license, and it says nothing about place of birth on there. My driver's license doesn't have that information either... I was talking about the personal ID card. Here everybody is issued one when they turn 16, and you need i...

How much time do you spend looking at your ID card? Personally, I haven't looked at mine in 10 years, and even then all I checked was the birth-date and picture. Neither do I, but at the very least I would look at it when it is first issued to me, and if it says "Rome" instead of "Tokyo" under Plac...

Sneaking up on someone with a heart condition is probably not one of Aiko's brightest ideas. That makes her very punctual, which, in turn, led us out here long before the noon deadline—to ensure she doesn't go searching through the dorms. If she really is that punctual, why are they so afraid she mi...

I found myself yet again gazing... Most of the story is present tense... the positive heavily outweight the rest. outweighed since I got together with Hanako a couple of weeks back If it's autumn in your story, mak that "months" homerun teacher So Mutou teaches Baseball as well now? ;-) You probabl...

The door to the bathroom was just passed my bed

past

his hands dashing over his keyboard as he his eyes were mere centimeters from the screen.

Something missing here?
That's all I noticed in this chapter.
Good job again!

While I generally agree with you, I don't think "enormous" is a good example, since here, the neutral use is the more common one. enormous 1. (obsolete) Deviating from the norm; unusual, extraordinary. 2. (obsolete) Exceedingly wicked; atrocious or outrageous. 3. Extremely large; greatly exceeding t...

Ah crap. I keep logging in almost every hour to see if its been updated......I want to say thats a sad addiction...... But this fic is SOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOD No need to log. Just subscribe topic. You will get email when someone add some message. Ah, but then he'll have to check his email every ho...

Nice chapter. Hanako might be a bit too outgoing towards a stranger, especially one as tall (and thus intimidating) as Gustav, but I was still able to buy it. A few small to medium issues: Hisao managed to keep eye contact with me even though I had forgotten to put my shirt on. Why should that take ...

BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:

BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:A boy lives with his wealthy family, whom own a zoo.
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so I can observe Hisao, whom has been roped into working with them.

I've been ruminating on this since I wrote it. I'm sure that both are grammatically correct...

They're not.