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by Mirage_GSM
Mon Jun 03, 2013 1:09 pm
Forum: Support
Topic: Fortschritt der deutschen Übersetzung; Nachfrage
Replies: 21
Views: 12707

Re: Fortschritt der deutschen Übersetzung; Nachfrage

Die Arbeiten gehen weiter, aber einen Releasetermin gibt es weiterhin nicht, und wird es auch in absehbarer Zukunft nicht geben.
Allerdings brauchst du in den nächsten sechs Monaten definitiv keinen erwarten.
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Jun 03, 2013 7:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369541

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 6/02/13 ~ C.38 - Departure

To be honest I think there was far too much of a focus on sex in this chapter. There are reasons--beyond the physical--why that's the case, though. Well, the problem is there apparently have been "reasons beyond the physical" for the past half dozen chapters or so... Yes, well, if you think about i...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Jun 03, 2013 4:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route
Replies: 448
Views: 257663

Re: "Can You Open Your Heart?" - a Rika pseudo-route

You might be surprised. There are plenty of very good stories here.
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Jun 03, 2013 4:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: First, Do No Harm will be a deadfic, read for info
Replies: 10
Views: 3599

Re: First, Do No Harm Pt. 1 (The Story Of a Nurse)

Not much to comment on storywise yet... As for the rest, the only thing that stuck out was that you sometimes put spoken text into a paragraph of its own. This is not neccessary if the speaker and the person acting in the corresponding sentence are the same. It definitely should NOT be done if you s...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Jun 01, 2013 4:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Newton's Laws (Mutou fic)
Replies: 11
Views: 3230

Re: Newton's Laws (Mutou fic)

The author hasn't been online for more than three months.
I think our well-intentioned tips aren't reaching him...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri May 31, 2013 6:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Observations - Oneshot
Replies: 14
Views: 7784

Re: Observations - Oneshot

No, it's okay as it is. At first I thought nurse was the narrator, so maybe you could make it a bit clearer that he isn't one of the five, though.

Good job by the way. I always like stories that provide some kind of fresh idea or perspective.
by Mirage_GSM
Thu May 30, 2013 5:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hideaki: A Tale of Manliness
Replies: 186
Views: 56705

Re: Hideaki: A Tale of Manliness

...Wait, why are we assuming he married Akira in his fic? Isn't there another Satou sister? Lilly appeared in one of the earlier chapters, and then she was definitely not married. Well, Akira appeared as well, but I was too lazy to reread those passages to see if there were any indications one way ...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu May 30, 2013 5:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hideaki: A Tale of Manliness
Replies: 186
Views: 56705

Re: Hideaki: A Tale of Manliness

You know what the most unbelievable thing about this story is?
“It’s just me... KENJI SATOU!”
That Kenji married Akira :-)
by Mirage_GSM
Thu May 30, 2013 5:11 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4980
Views: 1482617

Re: Ask!

Uhm...
Aura wrote:We only want some kind of discussions to not happen in our front yard, which is why I normally would've banned you.
You're very much in their front-yard right now...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed May 29, 2013 7:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369541

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 5/22/13 ~ C.37 - For Better or Wor

Good. When I saw you posted here, I was afraid I'd be awake until three o'clock in the morning^^°
Even though tomorrow's a holiday, I'd rather go to bed now ;-)
by Mirage_GSM
Wed May 29, 2013 7:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
Replies: 86
Views: 26716

Re: Once More [Update: 5/29]

I can already smell the sweat and stale cigarette odors wafting out of the place. Given Japan's policy towards smokers, it's very unlikely you'll find any arcade where you'd be allowed to smoke indoors... Anyway, I have a real problem understanding your OC's thoughts. He thinks that he wants to be ...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed May 29, 2013 12:01 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84589

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Updated 5/29

Having just finished translating the last scene of Emi's path, reading this chapter felt a bit... strange. Anyway, nice dialoge for Emi and Kenji as well as Kenji's antics. I like your Kenji even better than the one in the VN. As for typos, nothin gmore than two or three then/than mishaps and: a man...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed May 29, 2013 3:25 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
Replies: 103
Views: 43432

Re: A Ritsu Route (Updated 5/26)

but i'm not sure to do it with totally new characters, some k-on characters, or some pre-existing ones. i'll definitely introduce them in the next chapter or the chapter after that, so i guess both you and i will find out soon. Might I suggest doing neither? Introducing the complete K-on cast at Ya...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue May 28, 2013 5:43 am
Forum: Blog posts
Topic: Katawa Shoujo 2 Cancelled
Replies: 116
Views: 81321

Re: Katawa Shoujo 2 Cancelled

Just look at the date of the blog post.
by Mirage_GSM
Tue May 28, 2013 5:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
Replies: 103
Views: 43432

Re: A Ritsu Route (Updated 5/26)

I don't know whom Ritsu would get on the phone by calling 911, but it wouldn't be emergency services. The number for that in Japan is 119. Also, while the concept of an animal amublance is interesting and a nice plot device for your story, I don't think there's any country tha actually has such a th...