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When I read "Rika route" my first reaction was "Oh no, not another one." It seems you're trying to make her something different than a self-destructive, nihilistic brat, though, so colour me cautiously optimistic :-) Oh, and congrats on getting it right: ...I say, referencing mine and Emi's first me...

Well, the personality you've given her is definitely something different. I like the story so far, but... Have you thought about trying to put more than one sentence in a paragraph? The story reads like a shopping list. Some things I noticed: Ritsu peers into her bag before scratching the bag of her...

Hmm... Seems it wasn't as bad as I remebered...

Y'all should have seen the shitstorm when the new design for Emi was introduced^^°
You can probably still find it if you dig deep enough...

1. Having him realize that he has to change in one sentence and do the exact opposite in the next is a bit over the top, even for addicts. 2. I tried to google "adrenaline addiction" but that doesn't even seem to be a thing. The only hits are various self-help sites. 3. Even if it were a recognized ...

I can faintly hear my father's words but their distorted and covered by a loud ringing in my ears.

they're

But most of all, I need to find a car to numb this pain of guilt

You know, Mental diseases like Alzheimer won't get him accepted into Yamaku

He even gave me a fifty percent discount on this stuff And the prices are still insane? Anyway my bet is, he trained the cat to run away at the next stop and come back to him to be adopted by the next gullible person. She’ll be fine in the car if we crack a window and it stays cool in the parking s...

Nice.
Though I think the prices they're planning to charge are a bit steep, considering most of the articles are supposed to be free...

Sooner or later all fandoms "die" so the answer is "yes." I see no indication that this andom is going to die anytime soon, though. There are still to many posts here for me to even try to keep up with, so I mostly only keep up with the fanfiction section and even there posting seems to be strong as...

Also, we have to keep in mind that the narration of Katawa Shoujo is first person present tense, which rules out some of the tricks you can get away with in a more "traditional" narrative: you either show the scene or part of the scene as it happens, you summarize it, or you don't show it at all. I...

Misha and Shizune, well... they have each other, and not much else. Lilly goes as far as to call it a "dependency bubble", and while that may not be the most level-headed remark, it's not entirely inaccurate either. With that in mind, the fact that during the whole act Shizune and you, the author b...

I'm not sure what you're trying to say. None of the girls in KS is (canonically) mentally ill. There is no mention in the story of Misha having ADHD or Rin's absent-mindedness being anything but a strange personaltity. KS is explicitly not about mentally ill characters, that's why the school, Yamaku...

I was inspired by the beta storyline where Misha also gets hit by a car

There was no such storyline in the beta.

I do think I could have made his thought process a little better. Well, your desire to build suspense interferes with your ability to make the protagonist's motivations clear... If you straight out told the readers that he didn't confront his club members for fear he wouldn't be allowed back into t...

Okay, I'll just comment as I go along... First of all it doesn't seem like Shizune to let this Takamichi guy get away with sending someone else to take his punishment for him. I think her sense of justice would not admit that. ... Especially after she has it pointed out to her. I could have just lef...