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I know kosher still visits the forums from time to time, but considering the last update was almost three yeras ago and he has taken on another writing project in the meantime, I think the chances of him continuing this are quite slim.
Also: No requesting.

The car groaned and roared as it tried to move forward but couldn’t as it was still in park. The stench of melting rubber and heating asphalt filtered into the car as a cloud of smoke churned out from behind us. Now I don't drive an automatic, but I'm pretty sure that's not what happens when you hi...

Like I promised, this story isn't dead. It just updates extremely irregularly... Day 4, 20:00 Ah, this feels good! I turn the dial a few more degrees towards “hot” and relish the feeling of the water rinsing away the soap. After our hike halfway around Lake Akan and an afternoon spent in some boring...

Rin's is definitely the longest...

No, it's not.
By line count Emi's is the longest, by word count it is Shizune's.
Rin ranks second either way.

I wonder if KS authors expected this to make her seem unsympathetic when they made her do that, or that players would find it utterly forgivable.

Actually, that's an interesting question.
Let's see if Suriko is inclined to answer it.

I make sure to add “but that's all I am I'm inclined to say a comma should go after add. Mirage will probably be able to clairfy that.[/quote] I'm honoured to be considered this forum's resident comma expert, even though I'm very much prone to placing a few commas too many myself. Just ask my proof...

Just one small thing:

“You'll need every excuse you can find to spend time with him once the final trimester begins.”

The final Trimester won't begin until January. At this time she should be worried about the second one.

Nice addition and good to see you still working on this.

I agree with most of what Helbereth said, except for the stuff about nurse. He's been known to act a little... unorthodox if it serves his agenda, and I definitely wouldn't put it past him to drop some subtle hints to get Hisao interested in Rika without outright violating his confidentiality. And t...

And i don't mind the few members, i usually find them to be the most fun to be in anyway

I wasn't talking about the forums in general but about the club of "people who dare to citicize Lilly."

We worked together trying to put the shelf up for the smaller prizes. A few lines of past tense slipped in here and in the following paragraph. Also, there are some small problems with the timeline: You said it was the day before the festival, but that would have been Saturday. The lunch on the roo...

In the bad end is what I'm going to call "the pussy response", not fighting for her whatsoever. Not even an attempt, barely a whimper in protest. Well, considering how the conversation goes that's not really surprising, isn't it? When Hisao confronts her, her first reaction is not remorse for not t...

If I could imagine a situation where I’d use the future unreal conditional, I wouldn’t mind so much that I have to learn it. I see what you did there. That's exactly what I said when I proofread this ;-) Well, we do know that Misha gets dizzy on the stairs. Please don't get started with this again....

I did not like it, save for ‘breathlessly, that one fit perfectly. I even hated the fact that Lilly kept her summons hidden from Hisao for so long. Leaving hisao with a kind of feeling of, first she tells me she loves me and sleeps with me, and then we might never be together after we graduate!?! O...

They probably cleared this with the devs in advance. What they sell does contain a few physical goods (Booklet, etc.) so they will have costs to offset.

Hmm. I don't know how I didn't find that route. It was a pretty interesting read, very nicely written.

I'm glad you dind't find it until now.
Since then every story featuring Rika has painted her more or less the same way. I'm looking forward to you taking a different approach!