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Also it is an unused classroom, so it wouldn't have a carpet. Not sure what relevance the state of a classroom's usage has to do with carpet. I know that all the classrooms in my highschool bar the science and art/home economics rooms were carpeted; utilised regularly or not. The emphasis was meant...

How would Hanako take it if Lilly kept to herelf until the very last moment and Hanako didn't end up in the newspaper club? How would she fare?

You mean how would Hanako feel after Lilly's bad end w/o the club?
Terrible.

Don't worry, that question doesn't come up in Hanako's path.

There are a few things that are not really important to the story but that stick out nontheless... For example your description of the tea-room: I doubt Lilly's cane would have left lasting marks on the door. Also it is an unused classroom, so it wouldn't have a carpet. Then there's this: "You did q...

Well, it usually is just a single person showing up on TV. It wouldn't totally kill the joke, but I'm still going to leave it as it is. Interesting to see a story started before the release continue after it. Yes, when I reread the story last year, I found it interesting how much of what I'd written...

Ooh, look! Another chapter already... Day 5, 08:00 Damn that weather! Nomiya sure wasn’t kidding when he said it would probably rain today. It started around two o’clock in the morning and kept on until now. Since our rooms are directly beneath the roof I didn’t get nearly enough sleep tonight. Stil...

That is at best speculation.
In a storytelling sense it is probably, because this is the Lilly route, and Hanako's problems were not mean to be that much of a focus there. So Hanako would probably have been fine no matter what Lilly did.

I'll be here for barely half a year though, Ten Months is a bit more than "barely half a year." “Well, you've been brought two meals so far that have gone untouched, according to your chart. I guess you were asleep.” I've never been to a hospital as a patient before, but I guess they'd wake you for...

This chapter could have done with some more editing... For example: She rose the whatever it was up to block... should be "raised" Also, try not to be so hung up on the similarities with/differences to Persona. Instead of explaing the differences, take that time to explain your story and let those w...

...so, how would one make the tires move while still being in place? Emergency brake? Park your car with the front against a wall. (Be sure not to have it in reverse.) Then hit the accellerator. I doubt what forgetmenot said would work very well either outside of computer games. Tires with that lit...

No, as long as he has his foot on the brakes, the tires are not moving.
If the tires were moving, the car would be as well. That's their function.

Well it's definitely been some time since we've seen a fic here containing something of the supernatural. @BWT: You might know SMT better under the title "Persona" The beginning was a bit confusing - probably intentionally... At "Osaka" I was tinking "Azumanga Daioh Crossover" and then over the next...

The car groaned and roared as it tried to move forward but couldn’t as I had planted my left foot firmly on the brake. The stench of melting rubber and heating asphalt filtered into the car as a cloud of smoke churned out from behind us. Well, as long as the tires are not actually... you know... mo...

Also, we have no idea when Lilly was told she'd have to go back to Scotland or when she decided that she would. All that information she keeps to herself. It's entirely possible that they had their wheatfield scene and then a few days later Lilly got a phonecall about having to come home. We don't ...

Hm... While I don't think writing the characters 'in character' was very high on the priority list here, it's kind of an achievement that everyone (with the possible exception of Lilly) is portrayed out of character here. Reminds me of kosher's "Madam Lillian" in a way ^^° Also, I don't really see a...

Intersting, yes. So it looks like you're going to intoduce another member of Lilly's class. It might have been interesting to see the enrollment ceremony for new students - most OC stories use exchange students, so this would have been a chance to show something differen - but since you wrote "twelv...