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by Mirage_GSM
Thu Aug 08, 2013 5:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Winter Update!
Replies: 198
Views: 75382

Re: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Summer Update

Good point; I meant a dozen yards, so I adjusted it to reflect that.
Might as well adjust it to a dozen metres while you're at it ;-)
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Aug 08, 2013 5:49 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 3 up 8/8]

3. Lilly having feelings for Hisao and trying to relcaim him ... I was under the impression (I might e mistaken of course) that the author intends to stick to the events up to Lilly's Bad End (i.e. Lilly leaving for Scotland) and then continuing from there. So far there's been no divergence, only a...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Aug 08, 2013 2:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 3 up 8/8]

If I'd burdened either you or Hisao with it, both of you would have put my needs above your own. If she really predicted that he would put her needs above his own like she claims, why was she surprised/disappointed when he actually did that afterwards? "The only other alternative was that I would d...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Aug 08, 2013 2:33 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]
Replies: 202
Views: 79465

Re: Meanwhile I wait [Hisao x original character]

Does that mean you're discontinuing the story and are just posting your remaining notes?
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Aug 08, 2013 1:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Winter Update!
Replies: 198
Views: 75382

Re: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Summer Update

I don't think "fight" was ever an option ;-)
Just kidding.
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Aug 08, 2013 2:36 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Concerning "Slow Recovery"
Replies: 13
Views: 4353

Re: Concerning "Slow Recovery"

I think the reason is one of the following:
a) The devs thought that being mean to Misha should result in karmic punishment in the form of a bad end or
b) They thought "Let's put a trap there that leads to the bad end LOL"
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Aug 08, 2013 2:31 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Winter Update!
Replies: 198
Views: 75382

Re: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Summer Update

read the Chinese on the back –how he claimed to be fluent in it The Japanese are perfectly able to read[/] chinese, even if they don't speak it.* They use the same Kanji after all. “our objective is that sow roughly fifty yards in front of us... Sow or cow? the cow was looking strait at us strait T...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Aug 07, 2013 7:27 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Concerning "Slow Recovery"
Replies: 13
Views: 4353

Re: Concerning "Slow Recovery"

You probably did ^^°
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Aug 06, 2013 6:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Octovaitor's Story Time (Explicit)
Replies: 24
Views: 8782

Re: Octovaitor's Story Time (Explicit)

my eyes shifted over to the rug that Shizune had placed in a conspicuous corner of the room...
If Shizune and Misha are both down there, who put the rug back in place after closing the trapdoor?
No, I'm not going to ask how the trapdoor got there in the first place...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Aug 06, 2013 12:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 2. up 8/6]

I even have a key to the storage shed if you want to use any of the equipment!"
In any other situation this might have been confused for an inappropriate offer :D

I liked this chapter much better than the first - probably because less Lilly.
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Aug 05, 2013 3:54 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly BE Continuation) [Updated 8/5/1

"That someone decides he's not even going to let me make the decision!"
On the contrary. That's exactly what he did.
Well, I'm used to people trying to shift the blame away from Lilly at whatever cost by now.

Anyway, I really like your Hanako perspective. It came out quite well.
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Aug 05, 2013 1:23 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: K-Shounen!
Replies: 294
Views: 59462

Re: K-Shounen!

Well, that's one way to increase one's post count...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Aug 05, 2013 1:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Ritsu Route (Updated 12/26)
Replies: 103
Views: 43432

Re: A Ritsu Route (Updated 8/4)

Ritsu and I planned out the journey a few days ago. JR Touhoku Shinkasen from Sendai to Tokyo station, then transfer to the JR Keihin Tohoku line towards Isogo, then at Oimaichi station take the Rinkai line towards Shinkiba. Someone's been doing research when I played in her a junior tennis tournam...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Aug 04, 2013 2:15 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Where The Blame Falls. (OC. Upd. 07-10-15)
Replies: 47
Views: 17393

Re: Where The Blame Falls. (OC)

Only two little nitpicks: Why the hell does Ikuno have to have her clubroom in the one part of the school that I never spend time near, and [that] doesn’t have any braille signs? Try adding a "that" there. Makes the sentence less prone to misunterstandings. I was wondering why Ikuno should carry bra...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Aug 04, 2013 2:01 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Would you watch Katawa Shoujo anime?
Replies: 114
Views: 31585

Re: Would you watch Katawa Shoujo anime?

How would this be done? 5 seasons where you do each girl's route and assumedly get the good endings? It won't be done. If it were, there would be several possibilities: a) Choose one path and go with that, like in Tsukihime. b) Do a bit of every path and put the girl he's going to end up with last ...