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The final ring toss was way too cliché, but otherwise good chapter. I think he’s just being modest. He throws the ring behind himself without looking, and she doesn't believe him when he says it was luck? “Just kiss her already!” I don't think this is something you would hear anywhere in Japan. Kiss...

Bad Apple wrote:

Miracle_GSM wrote:...

Aw shucks. Now I feel like one nitpicky bastard. Me and my editorial, perfectionist tendencies.

Miracle?

It doesn't happen often that a story I had such misgivings about after the first chapter turns into something like this. Nothing at all to complain about in this chapter. Your Hanako is great! I'm curious for the next chapter. In this story I don't have the feeling that Hisao would feel compelled to...

Both can be correct, depending on the rest of the sentence: In your sentence Hisao continues to smile and rub his head as he sidesteps out of the booth and comes round to stand in front of Rika and I. "Rika and '1st person pronoun'" is the object of the sentence, thus the pronoun has to be "me". If...

Comrade wrote:I am also the one who seems to have the most interest in creating it, but I still hav to get premission.

Oh, I'm interested as well, but I know SC won't decide any faster if we push him

Anyway, whomever he chooses, we can still coordinate with each other per PM when collecting stories.

We will probably have a post for each major character and a Table of Contents in the OP to allow you to navigate directly to the pairing you're interested in.

...a pair of black jeans that extenuate my slender legs and firm behind. I must remember to thank my mum for gifting me this body some time. a bit vain, isn't she? ;-) That's good. OCs need faults in order not to become Mary Sues. ...I think she would "be reminded" of her bad eye instead of "notcin...

I also volunteer.
Already said so but just for form's sake...

I passed out what I'd bought, and as usual Emi dug in quickly while Rin ate more slowly. One past tense sentence slipping in... Otherwise, I agree with each chapter getting better than the last. You've got Hisao and Emi down pat, but your Rin is a bit... off. Her factoring in nurse's intention does...

“Knowing my daughter, she’s probably feeding you those stupid cardboard bars.” Should be "granddaughter" Ritsu told me her grandmother used to be the head of PepsiCo Japan. According to Ritsu, she was the most deadly corporate figure in Japan for twenty years Let me tell you something about women i...

thing is i thought i was going on shizunes route since i went to the shanghai with them. it seemed like i was getting too close to her, then i went out to town with lilly and met rin, and then i saw the option to not talk about the problem. i never picked it before so i was curious. If you are on S...

So then is it supposed to be some kind of organiser? Like, listing fics based on content or theme or other such things? Perhaps it might be convenient if someone were trying to find something of which they didn't recall the name/author, but all in all it would amount to a very pointless list, becau...

Naturally. The closer the submission is to the format we choose, the easier the job of the person responsible for updating. Speaking of format - any suggestions for improving the format I ... suggested? You mentioned "genre" but given that 95% of all the stories here will be romance, I'm not sure we...

- I don't see any rason for suggestions to be PMed. I can see that flooding the inbox of whoever manages the list whenever a new fic is posted. If there are a few reserved posts at the beginning of the thread, there is plenty of space for suggestions and/or discussions of suggestions afterwards - pr...

There are certainly some very good one-shot stories out there that I'd have no problem including. And of course putting every single fic on the forums in the list would inflate it beyond usefulness. However, I don't think organizing a petition for every fic before it is included is a) unrealistic an...