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by Mirage_GSM
Sat Aug 24, 2013 2:09 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)
Replies: 169
Views: 98322

Re: Tips for fanfiction writers (that means YOU)

Tip: If you rarely write stories, start small. Don't try to throw out a 100K word epic as a first work. It's going to fail. Badly. Personally I prefer shorter updates. I often check the forums at times when I don't have enough time to read through a monster post or even a twenty chapter story someon...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Aug 23, 2013 12:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Ascent: An Emilogue (Erotic Content)
Replies: 91
Views: 47924

Re: Ascent: An Emilogue (Erotic Content)

Forum needs more of a lot ;-; just about all of the good fabrics are either pseudo routes or Hanako. Not that I'm complaining, Hanako > all, still wish there were more fabrics of high quality regarding other characters. I'm looking forward to this one, almost done with the Emi route! Oh, the forum ...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Aug 23, 2013 2:33 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Summer By The Sea [A sorta-sequel to Weekend at Hisao's]
Replies: 69
Views: 30416

Re: Summer By The Sea [A sorta-sequel to Weekend at Hisao's]

I'd assume hanako lilly and rin were, probably shizune too, not sure about emi though
What? Raped by gigantic space horse demons?
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Aug 22, 2013 4:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84589

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Updated 8/21

It would probably be even more depressing if we didn't already know how it's going to turn out ...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Aug 22, 2013 9:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 162173

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 8/22]

Glad to see this continue. A few comments - as usually nothing major: I would always take my violin over to her house and we'd play together ... I remember their maid chastising us for playing after nine thirty. ... "So you had a maid?" I'm not sure how Hisao arrives at this conclusion... "Hisao. Yo...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Aug 22, 2013 9:13 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Capture the moment (Hisao/OC) Chapter 3 posted 5/9/13
Replies: 32
Views: 9667

Re: Capture the moment (Hisao/OC) Chapter 2 posted 21/8/13

Oddball wrote gems like Shower Scenes or Freaks and Friends. (The latter is still unfinished, though.)
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Aug 22, 2013 8:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Broken String Symphony
Replies: 14
Views: 6421

Re: Broken String Symphony

Homophones are The Enemy: their so damn contradictory in their nature. "they're" Actually, a whole makes it sound neater than it really was... "hole" With that out of the way - I guess this is not the Kenji we all know and whom some of us love... Might get a bit confusing later on, but why not. I do...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Aug 22, 2013 8:29 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Summer By The Sea [A sorta-sequel to Weekend at Hisao's]
Replies: 69
Views: 30416

Re: Summer By The Sea [A sorta-sequel to Weekend at Hisao's]

It may be that there are a lot of deaf people who do think so, but Shizune has never been known to mince words. I guess I wasn't really clear there. What you're saying is exactly the point. They don't dance around the subject. Deaf people are known to cut to the chase, leading to the term "deaf blu...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Aug 22, 2013 2:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Summer By The Sea [A sorta-sequel to Weekend at Hisao's]
Replies: 69
Views: 30416

Re: Summer By The Sea [A sorta-sequel to Weekend at Hisao's]

While it is conceivable that Shizune would think this way, it would likely imply a sense of significant shame about her deafness. I don't really see why this should be. Most KS characters think of their disability as some sort of "condition", and with the exception of Hisao and Hanako they are not ...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Aug 21, 2013 6:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Come In, Yeti Actual [Chapter 7] [updated 19 Aug]
Replies: 70
Views: 37199

Re: Kenji's Conspiracy (KS x Deus Ex) [Updated Aug 21st]

Daigo gave Hisao a knife to protect himself should anything have happened. Without any other explanation my first impression was that Lilly was threatening Hisao with the knife because he had disrespected the name of god ^^° I just can't see Lilliy and Akira as rivals ... He said that the character...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Aug 21, 2013 3:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84589

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Updated 8/21

I just made things worse, didn't I? Yes, you did. I might do that, though I'm curious why you haven't yet. I never really wondered about the meaninghard enough ^^° Although with our luck s/he's just a Pet Girl of Sakurasou fan. I haven't heard of that novel and don't know how it is relevant to the ...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Aug 21, 2013 3:12 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 8 up 8/21]

I have the chance to get a good look Emi as she's running. missing an "at" here. A good part of it covers ground that already had been covered in several scenes at the beginning of Emi's route in the game... I was going to comment that the beginning seemed pretty familiar with some lines taken verb...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Aug 21, 2013 2:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Come In, Yeti Actual [Chapter 7] [updated 19 Aug]
Replies: 70
Views: 37199

Re: Kenji's Conspiracy (KS x Deus Ex) [Updated Aug 21st]

Well, that took me a lot longer to work through than I expected it to. Your story seems very... disjointed in places. Sometimes I simply can't follow Hisao's thoughts or tell what the heck just happened. For example during the scene at the track, it seems like at one point Hisao fell down, but I can...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Aug 21, 2013 2:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84589

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Updated 8/21

“The word before Bar is the Russian word for bar,” Kenji explained, “so it basically says ‘Bar Bar and Grill.” I still don't get it... ...the bar tender himself seemed to be an older man... Bartender is one word. If you really want to know the meaning of Shiina, you could try to PM hir. If he can't...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Aug 21, 2013 1:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Summer By The Sea [A sorta-sequel to Weekend at Hisao's]
Replies: 69
Views: 30416

Re: Summer By The Sea [A sorta-sequel to Weekend at Hisao's]

Hey, themocaw is back!
This is your first new story since... Oh, I remember you did a short one back in April, didn't you?
And you're going back to your roots with this one ;-)

Anyway, welcome back!

Did Jigoro learn to sign somewhen in the meantime, or is that conversation held with pen and paper?