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by Mirage_GSM
Fri Aug 30, 2013 10:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Once More [Update: 9/26]
Replies: 86
Views: 26716

Re: Once More [Update: 8/29]

And my sister’s behavior and I don’t want to start comparing this girl to my sister more than my dream already did last night. Copy pasta... Now that's one sad guy. Hopefully, it is story about how he gets better. Character development and all of that. Going by the previous chapters he did get bett...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Aug 30, 2013 3:12 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Miki and Taro: Rat Race
Replies: 101
Views: 29955

Re: Miki and Taro: Rat Race

“Haven’t you noticed that a lot of the girls around here have been looking a bit off these past few days?” I ask him. So... All the girls at Yamaku get their period around the same time? I've heard about girls "synching" their roommates, but that's a bit... excessive. (Though Shizune might just be ...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Aug 30, 2013 2:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239266

Re: The great fan fiction archive

I'm a little surprised and a tad disappointed that non of my work was added to this 'archive' of yours. Don't worry, Snicket, I definitely intend to add some of your stuff. The problem is, most of your work is well hidden in the KS-Shorts thread. I've been saving the shorts collection threads a bit...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Aug 29, 2013 9:06 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239266

Re: The great fan fiction archive

you could easily sort it by pairings Sorting by pairings was one of the options we discussed before comrade opened the thread. We decided on sorting alphabetically for now. If we notice a significant increase of stories beginning with "A" in the next months, we might look into that again, but so fa...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Aug 29, 2013 3:02 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239266

Re: The great fan fiction archive

As for the reasons: you should swap 'the' to the end and use the second word for the alphabetical listing. Wouldn't really be a help... The alphabetisation is just to avoid any kind of subjective ranking. If you look through the list for a new story to read, you won't know a title anyway, and if you...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Aug 28, 2013 4:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84589

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!

to help take mine and Hanako’s stuff home for the break. "Hanako's and my" "To help take mine stuff" would sound silly, wouldn't it? Nice ending. An accidental marriage proposal is something you don't see very often :lol: Now let's see what kind of supernatural entity is going to get their ass kick...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Aug 28, 2013 4:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Behind my Scars [Updated to: Chapter 6]
Replies: 58
Views: 26246

Re: Behind my Scars [Updated to: Chapter 6]

Hisao seems to be recounting something, but it goes over both mine and Lilly’s head. What Dippeggs said - also "Recalling" Well, your Rin reads like she's spent a little too much time with Kenji^^° Foreign tourists in a backwater like that? and enough to fill both the Shanghai and the streets as we...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Aug 28, 2013 7:13 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239266

Re: The great fan fiction archive

You realize that you just have to quote that to have the code?
But I agree that this takes up much less space in the post.
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Aug 28, 2013 5:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239266

Re: The great fan fiction archive

Sorry for cluttering up the thread. Comrade has problems accessing his email at the moment. I'll remove this once it has been integrated in the OP. I'm hoping that Guest Poster and themocaw can provide a word count for their stories... [url=http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=7113]Akira Pseudo-R...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Aug 28, 2013 5:11 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Katawa General (Poem/Song)
Replies: 4
Views: 4404

Katawa General (Poem/Song)

Just went through my hard drives sorting stuff and came across something I wrote more than a year ago. Doesn't seem like I posted it yet, so... While some people posted poems in the Fanfiction section before, I think this would be better placed here. I guess most people who've been around teh intern...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Aug 28, 2013 3:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 10 up 8/28

Hmm... Does that mean he followed her to the airport after all?
I really thought in this continuum he wouldn't have felt the need to...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Aug 28, 2013 2:41 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: KS 2- Rise of Kenji - The Fanfiction (Chapter 2 - 29/8/13)
Replies: 16
Views: 9340

Re: KS 2- Rise of Kenji - The Fanfiction

...to make sure she hadn't wondered off... Normally I would consider this a typo, but this is about Rin, so it is oddly fitting... Towards the end you got a bit sloppy: Rest assured that this nothing to do with Yamaku but… "this has" if it just cause out the wrong box has been ticked on a form. if ...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Aug 27, 2013 4:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 30th Apr 2014)
Replies: 144
Views: 175494

Re: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 27th Aug)

Saki also takes the chance to tidy Hanako’s fringe, revealing some of her scars. To my surprise, Hanako doesn’t protest. ... “Oh, I… I’ll th-think about it. Thanks, Saki.” ... Hisao and I st-stood up for Lilly Who is that girl, and what has she done to Hanako? ;-) I guess her being OOC here is inte...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Aug 27, 2013 2:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Of Secrets and Scandals (an OC pseudo-pseudo-route)
Replies: 10
Views: 5661

Re: Of Secrets and Scandals (an OC psuedo-psuedo-route)

Some people he was seeing on a daily occurrence, while others he had really one had one encounter. "on a daily basis" or "as a daily occurence" I'd use the former. And there's probably a "with" missing at the end of the sentence. I feel like this chapter is not as...polished as the first one. Nothi...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Aug 27, 2013 2:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Non, Je ne regrette rien
Replies: 8
Views: 5195

Re: Non, Je ne regrette rien

Well, that was surprisingly... normal by your standards...
Considering the topic the characters are also surprisingly in character.
Nicely done!

Oh, and nice pictures, too. Did you make them yourself?