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I assume you meant Acik?

Hoitash wrote:I'll have to think up lyrics for a KS version of the song, now.

Way ahead of you there...

It's like a freakin' vice grip! What a mean thing to say about an innocent little girl... Or did you mean vise-grip? ;-) (I know the brits sometimes really spell it this way, and usually I like British spelling, but it always looks strange to me.) Nice chapter, though your OC got a bit more douchy ...

A Mary Sue/Gary Stu-fic is a story with an OC that is usually (though not neccessarily) a self insert - an idealised version of the author themselve. In a KS-fanfiction it is usually a new student arriving at Yamaku and immediately making friends with absolutely everybody. He is: - a foreigner - ric...

Sadly a Mary Sue-warning would amount to a valuaion, which is not allowed...
If you simply discount all OC fics out of hand, you'll miss a few very good ones.

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Hmm... When I wrote that entry I didn't even think that someone could consider this a spoiler. For one thing, as you said, the thread title more or less spoils it already, for another, I don't think anything that happens in the first chapter of a novel can ever be considered a spoiler. It's like Har...

On a semi-unrelated note, can someone explain the 'Miki route curse' I keep hearing about? More than one writer has attempted to write a Miki route. None of them have been completed. All but one of them (I believe; I'm a little behind on reading the fanfic forum) are dead. ...and I'm not sure about...

whether or not a student is actually present at the school is not covered by confidentiality. Hopefully nobody's too put off by this. Didn't even occur to me until you mentioned it. Why should it be confidential? It has nothing to do with health problems, and everybody who's on campus will find out...

...the brass doors slide apart, opening me to a lift with no other passengers... ... I arrive at the top floor, which opens me up to a short hallway... Hisao is opened by the doors? And later by the floor as well? So Shizune is the unnamed relative? She would have been one of my first guesses, behi...

I would strongly advise against describing a girl's experiences as "not that bad." It doesn't matter what you mean when you say something like that - those words are suicide. I didn't. I said that it's "not that bad for every girl." (note the emphasis) That means there are girls who don't have prob...

(Of course, Hisao/Hanako was always my favorite couple, so anything that attempts to continue/fix her Bad End is great in my book). To be honest, it was interesting to see that kind of thing the first, maybe the second time around, but the sheer number of Hisao X Hanako FixFics means that I'm not t...

I meant to imply that only some girls at Yamaku would get it at the same time (hence the "a lot" as opposed to "all.) I figured, if periods on average last about five days a week, with four weeks in a month, a decent number of girls would get it simultaneously. In that case, shouldn't there be a co...

As you know I prefer chapters in easily digestible chunks...

About this one: I'm not sure, but do you mean to imply that Hanako is unaware of who Lilly's cousin is? Her reaction was kind of strange. She should know that Lilly isn't on good terms with Shizune and her family.

I rarely have problems with word, but if you do, try notepad+