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by Mirage_GSM
Sat Sep 07, 2013 5:07 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239266

Re: The great fan fiction archive

I was contemplating adding that, but since the story is still ongoing and I'm not certain where you're going to take it, I left it out for now. Of course, if you say this isn't going to change, we can add it. My rule of thumb when compiling those is "If it's a pairing between two canon characters, i...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Sep 07, 2013 9:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Broken String Symphony
Replies: 14
Views: 6421

Re: Broken String Symphony

a cheerful looking girl with hair a shade of pink rarely seen in nature "rarely"? :lol: “It was nice to meet you Kenchan!” By now it's probably inevitable that in fanfiction Misha uses the chan-suffix for absolutely everybody even if she doesn't do that in the VN^^° Otherwise decent chapter. Nothin...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Sep 07, 2013 5:07 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [Development Halted]
Replies: 191
Views: 75239

Re: Blossom - A Miki pseudo-route [First Chapter 07/09/2013]

Hmm... Two things I noticed: First, your Suzu seems to be extremely similar to the version in Scissorlips' story, starting with her relationship to Miki and the rather extreme version of narcolepsy. Not neccessarily a bad thing - I have a narcoleptic character like that in one of my stories as well,...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Sep 07, 2013 4:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84589

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!

Ah, I admit, I forgot about that one.
Started out like a crackfic, but improved considerably about halfway through iirc.
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Sep 06, 2013 4:57 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Making a VN out of Katawa shoujo fanfics!
Replies: 27
Views: 14993

Re: Making a VN out of Katawa shoujo fanfics!

Well, of course you may use my stuff as well, but I wouldn't recommend it. My three larger stories all have a copious amount of characters ("Katawa Kijo" has 19 characters with lines, "Tripping" has 20 so far, and I don't even want to count those in "Victory Day") and I believe it would be a nightma...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Sep 06, 2013 4:47 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Katawa General (Poem/Song)
Replies: 4
Views: 4404

Re: Katawa General (Poem/Song)

Thanks. :D
Memorizing is not even that hard...
Try singing it without getting a knot in your tongue.
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Sep 06, 2013 10:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84589

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!

Check my signature.
Meh, I know that one, but they're colleagues not a couple.
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Sep 06, 2013 9:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!
Replies: 268
Views: 84589

Re: Hanako and Hisao –Road to Tokyo Conclusion Update!

Now I gotta go find some Kenji/Emi fanfics.
Hmm... I remember Fanfics pairing Kenji with Yuuko, Lilly, Shizune and recently even Hanako, but I come up blank for Kenji X Emi...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Sep 06, 2013 8:30 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Making a VN out of Katawa shoujo fanfics!
Replies: 27
Views: 14993

Re: Making a VN out of Katawa shoujo fanfics!

The fanfics are out there, they just need custom assets (sprites, BG's and music) and possibly to be converted into text more fitting to a VN and this can happen. I have a feeling you're dramatically underestimating the amount of work this requires... For one thing "just" is not the qualifier I'd u...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Sep 06, 2013 8:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
Replies: 124
Views: 47728

Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Edits & Update: 9/5]

Wow, you really did a lot of rewriting! I'd say it was worth it. This is a lot better than the previous version. The new chapter is also good. Looking forward to see this continued. "Nice. I never thought you had it in you, Yuuto. I'm totally seeing you in a different light now." Is that why she's c...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Sep 06, 2013 3:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Capture the moment (Hisao/OC) Chapter 3 posted 5/9/13
Replies: 32
Views: 9667

Re: Capture the moment (Hisao/OC) Chapter 3 posted 5/9/13

I really prefer your girlish Rika over the jaded one we usually see. Definitely a story to keep an eye on. Not much to fix - mostly a few typos: Hisao didn’t manage d Ha c kamichi - several times I keep eye contact with him but continue d Hisao aske d s tentatively still a good arm ' s length away. ...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Sep 06, 2013 2:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Freaks and Friends
Replies: 171
Views: 66474

Re: Freaks and Friends

Yay, it lives! As usual a few minor fixes: I might as well start getting read to for school... "Read to"? As I sit and watch... Where does she sit, and when did she sit down? As we walked, a bell sounded Past tense. but mostly I'm here for the teachers that don't know how to speak braille. Good one!...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Sep 05, 2013 11:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239266

Re: The great fan fiction archive

New update for the top post. includes a few one-short, one of them probably the very first one featuring Miki. [b][url=http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=1465&start=93]Aquitaine[/url][/b] by [b]Snicket[/b] (completed, 3.252 words) [b]PoV: [/b]Hisao; [b]Pairings: [/b]Hisao X Miki; [b]Begins: [/b...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Sep 05, 2013 2:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Lilly Bad End Continuation) [Ch 12 up 9/4]

Blasphemy wrote:Whenever a story contains prophecies I'd like to tear my hair out...
Even those can be extremely well written and surprise you now and again.
Not very often, granted, but I'd say the chances are higher than with three/foursome fics. 8)
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Sep 04, 2013 2:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Zombies - Updated 17/12/13
Replies: 80
Views: 21690

Re: Zombies - Updated 02/09/13

You should read it anyway.
It is one of the greatest stories by one of the greatest authors of all time.

Though, personally, I think Superiority is his best story...