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...so perhaps she is somehow distantly related to Kenji through an accidental typo on someone's birth certificate?

Their names are written in Kanji.
Being phonetically close is no indication at all on how easy it would be to change one into another via a typo.

“Done for the day? That was pretty good considering how many runs you missed with Emi. Hmm... I kinda lost track of what day it is in your story, but considering it started with the "Cold War" scene which takes place on Thursday shortly after Hisao's first run with Emi and it is still not Sunday ye...

Are you saying that you knew you would fuck Misha? If so, you need to get your mind out if the gutter :P. No social cues told me they would randomly have sex. In the other pathlines, like Emi's, he'll hug and comfort them. I guess KS really was the first Visual Novel you read^^° I agree with Xanato...

I'm a bit unclear about the time here... Its robotic-sounding voice tells me it's eleven-thirty. In the morning or in the evening? Most people wouldn't set an alarm for 11:30 in the morning, but... Given how late it is at Yamaku, I don't have time to ponder this thought further. If it's 11:30 in the...

I hope it's not literally a sequel to this one, because some stories are really cheapened by sequels...

causes me to jump a little and spina round to face Grandpa. One misplaced blank... I wonder If I will be as spritely when I'm his age. You mean like a fairy, like a softdrink or like a two-dimensional image? Or do you mean "sprightly"? I nod my head and eagerly slid the notes into my pocket slide -...

She only told me when she had her accident after a few months. I thought Miki only came to Yamaku at the beginning of the school year? She can't have known Suzu for more than a few weeks... “What do you mean? Wouldn’t she tell me if she liked me?” She all but did, didn't she? And after only a week,...

And where does it come in that being kind gives you the bad ending in Emi's arc? I think the big decision was discussing it with Misha, which I guess you could consider it not being kind, because you are giving her your issues, but she did ask. <Obv prejudice here. No. The "big decisions" in Emi's ...

Does it matter?

Who is this mysterious figure?

If I had to guess, I'd say it's Kenta.

Never set yourself a goal for the number of words in your story. You're only limiting yourself that way. Such stuff is for contests when all participants' works have to be judged to similar standards or for manga or newspapers where there's a certain amout of space that has to be filled. If you're d...

Well, if we don't even know who that partner is, why should the pairing be included at this time? And why should such non-information be in spoiler tags? And either it's magic or it is luck, coincidence, modern medicine, whatever you want to call it - you decide as the author - but "miracles" are ma...

And again, thanks Mirage_GSM for proof reading my work again :D believe it or not, this story is actually already written inside my mind.. I just happen to struggle with words which I can express on my native language that sadly has no translations in english :/ therefore, whatever I'm actually doi...

Fixed the code for that and removed the spoiler tags: Warnings are there to be read not to be hidden, and PoV is no plot point [b][url=http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=9037]Rebirth[/url][/b] – Epilogue by [b]Hanako Nakai[/b] (ongoing, word count pending) [b]PoV:[/b]Hanako, Hisao; [b]Pairings:...

Just a few fixes... And the continued advice for a proofreader. I will happen to have it done somewhere else.." If something "happens to"... well, happen, it is by definition something that happens by accident and that you cannot plan for. So for her to know that something will accidentally happen t...