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Okay, you got rid of the redundant double spacing. Now it's just some unneccessary line-breaks, but it doesn't affect readability much.

Here:

He gets up and walks over to the window, leaning his arms on the sill.

Nice chapter as always.

Good story - it's a bit like Rin herself^^°

Why do you use double-spacing withing a single piece of dialogue? Usually you'd use it only when he speaker changes. This makes it a bit hard to read.

Actually with "Closure" I wasn't even quite sure about all the circumstances after I figured out it must've been from the Beta period, as I just didn't know which kind of information outside of act 1 was known to the KS following or even specifically to this author, who for all I know may have had ...

Well, of the "old guys" I don't see anyone except for you and Oddball posting anymore.
I never really noticed a drop in fresh content though (even if the last week has been a bit slow). Threre are still as many new fics coming out as a year ago.
Some people go, some people come...

I remember reading a story where Shizune was secretly in love with Lilly and when Shizune finally told Misha she was gay, Misha just laughed and said something like, "as long as you're not trying to flirt with me, we're fine." Well, in almost every single story by Kosher any number from "two" to "a...

No, he collides with Emi on Wednesday and his first run with her is on Thursday, just before the "Cold War" between Shizune and Lilly where this story starts.

It can't be a Tuesday. Your first day was Thursday.
Since it is not yet Sunday, it has to be either Friday or Saturday...
Got to reread the first chapters to see how many days have passed since chapter 1.

What I infer from this is that all fics currently in the archive that are designated as beginning "after Act 1" fall into that category. Is that correct? Yes. I would say that's only true if the story is OC-centric. Otherwise, there's a high likelihood of continuity clash. Even if Hisao is the prot...

[Meet Misha and I for lunch tomorrow...

"Misha and me"

I'm still confused about the timeline... Which day is it currently?

There are no fics based on the beta, because the beta is basically the finished VN plus a few typos, and also because most of the beta testers don't even write fanfiction here. If a fic is based on Act 1, that info is already in the section "Begins", e.g. "after Act1 - Hanako end". If a fic is a pre...

Besides, that would mean he is related to Shizune as well, and we're already dangerously close to soap opera territory with that "cousins" thing...

Either you guys are joking or you're firm believers in circular logic. Take your pick. A bit of the former, but only a bit. Of course this citation originates from KS itself - which is funny since I didn't expect to find it there when I checked - but that doesn't change the fact that that meaning o...

Finally, this might be personal preference but it's either "OK" or "okay", not "Ok/ok". To me that's like using "damnit" when it's either "damn it" or "dammit". Or like using "alright" when it should be "all right". Everything else is alright. Oops... 8) (While I think "allright" is the lesser of t...

Well, most choices in Rin's path don't have any meaning anyway. The only choices that are really important are the one you mentioned and the very last one. All the others are just a very complicated way to determine which of two scenes you get to see somewhen in Act... 3 I think. I have another grip...