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Hisao's safety when he meet's Akira's father.

three out of two...

I state, making a mental note to pick up some other things at the pharmacy next time I go to get my prescriptions refilled.

I don't think he gets his prescriptions refilled at a pharmacy...

Her eyes are watering, a sign that she thought I was rejecting her.

Why would she think that?
A few pacing problems, but otherwise nice chapter.

The manly picnic has at least one point where a lot of time is passing:

"Four or five hours, or possibly several days later: (I lost track)"

Well, I have only secon-hand experience with alcohol, but I'v enever seen anyone get drunk that fast...
Maybe add a short time-skip after Hisao arrives and before they start talking about Suzu?

Didn't she want to invite him to the city that day?
Good chapter. A bit longer than usual if I'm not mistaken.

showing it in that moment, in a crowed area no less, that seems a bit OOC to me.

This.
This is Japan, where even holding hands in public is still frowned upon by some.
A scene like that would. not. happen.

We're not talking about opinions, we're talking about seeing what's happened in a narrative. Unless you can give a better case for some alternate interpretation, I don't see what the objection is.

This is going in circles. I'm out.

Somehow I'm trying to picture Miki in a Yukata and failing ;-) Hmm. I've never eaten so much that I couldn't stand up or walk afterwards and I'm not as fit as Miki... And one more nitpick: He hands us the bowls, resting Miki’s one on her wrist so she can eat and walk. Miki pays him and we leave She ...

Where in that does she say she's going? In this part it is not conclusively stated but only strongly implied. A few lines further down she confirms that she had already decided when Hisao asks her. Are you accusing me of holding her blameless? Uh.. No? For one thing, whether or not you blame her fo...

“Hisao! I said meet at lunch! I have to get ready, go wait in Suzu’s room or something. She’s awake, reading or something. Go! Let me change!”

Last time she just threw a towel over his head while changing

I don't think you are remembering correctly; however, to be fair to you, I find a lot of people miss this even when they have the text in front of them. In fact, Lilly doesn't tell Hisao she has decided. She just drops a few reasons why it would be ok for her to go, then she waits for his reaction....

Ah, I see. Thank you for the answer. I'm now wondering which route 22 was the writer for then...

A22 wrote Shizune's route.

Well, it's not that she hates all people who have disabilities that can be overcome.
She just hates that Emi is so obnoxious about it.

So how does nurse know about Rin?
She's not likely to wear perfume...