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by Mirage_GSM
Wed Oct 23, 2013 2:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13
Replies: 51
Views: 17712

Re: A Molly route.

Now why did you choose the effing Lelouch vi Britannia to have aphasia? You should choose something more badass, or something that relates to the anime :) Of course it has something to to with the Anime! All the cameos in the classroom CG do: Ritsu is playing the drums in the anime. Here she has ca...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Oct 22, 2013 6:11 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13
Replies: 51
Views: 17712

Re: A Molly route.

Like Numb said, this was a bit too short to say much about it yet, but one thing you should include even in short chapters like this is the scenery. Here, the reader has no idea where the scene takes place. We only know there's the sun overhead and there are trees somewhere nearby. Could be the gard...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Oct 22, 2013 5:55 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332253

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence){u 10/20/2

There's no reason he couldn't meet Rin in any number of different ways. By this time Iwanako is well and truly off the paved road Hisao took. She's going to spend the whole time until the festival in the hospital. I think that's a much better reason why she's unlikely to meet Rin... Except if Emi co...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Oct 22, 2013 5:02 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332253

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence){u 10/20/2

..., but Shizune hates Iwanako, so the chances of meeting Rin are hard. I find it kind of hard to follow your logic here... Regarding Emi, I don't think nurse would be the type to cover up something like this, but I can't see anybody getting expelled for causing an accident. She's in for a hell of ...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Oct 22, 2013 1:56 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Zombies - Updated 17/12/13
Replies: 80
Views: 21690

Re: Zombies - Updated 20/10/13

but don't let that ruin the magic for you.
Well, magic is a valid explanation for zombies...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Oct 22, 2013 1:48 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332253

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence){u 10/20/2

Personally I don't see much of a problem with Iwanako's overreaction. Sure, we're among relatively astute peers here, but I don't suppose many people (least of all a teenaged girl) have the medical literacy to fully understand a concussion, only that it's a brain injury (which sounds very very bad)...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Oct 22, 2013 1:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Zombies - Updated 17/12/13
Replies: 80
Views: 21690

Re: Zombies - Updated 20/10/13

So they have to die for the virus to kick in and then the virus restarts the bodily functions?
And you say this makes sense?
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Oct 21, 2013 4:15 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Former Sisterhood thread
Replies: 515
Views: 237102

Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Guest Poster wrote:And you probably should play Rin's route. It's rather heavy-handed, but worth the time.
Heavy-handed?
I'm not sure if that's really what you meant. If you did, I disagree empathically*

Yes, I know.
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Oct 21, 2013 9:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Zombies - Updated 17/12/13
Replies: 80
Views: 21690

Re: Zombies - Updated 20/10/13

You fool! That's rule #13 of zombies AU's, nobody can have previous knowledge of zombies. Of course you can. You just need to have paid a bit of attention in science class. Favourite line: ...if we look at zombies as a species, they are pretty much designed for failure. Their main form of reproduct...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Oct 21, 2013 9:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Golden Rainbow
Replies: 12
Views: 5614

Re: The Golden Rainbow

Okay, then is it the inability to perceive overtly obvious, intentional, absurd, self-deprecating but hilarious sarcasm? And taking a single line from a joke-ridden post completely out of context? Please bear in mind that written communication - as in forum posts - lacks certain cues reagrding the ...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Oct 21, 2013 2:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332253

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence){u 10/20/2

Great chapter again! It's nice to see someone putting some actual medical research into his story. The only thing I thought was a bit much was Iwanako's reaction to the information that she probably had a concussion. She acted like it was a death sentence even before the doctor told her there might ...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Oct 20, 2013 5:33 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4980
Views: 1482617

Re: Ask!

Lilly's appearance later in Shizune's route has been confirmed to be a continuity error.
No official word on the other question so far.
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Oct 20, 2013 11:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239266

Re: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive - 20/10/13

I'm not really sure a date in the thread title will be very helpful. For fanfictions, if the date changes you know that a new chapter has been added and that you'll find it at the end of the thread. For the archive you'll only know that something has been added somewhere and I don't think anybody wi...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Oct 20, 2013 5:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking Shoujo: The Meth Route *Updated 8/7/14*
Replies: 53
Views: 23742

Re: Breaking Shoujo: The Meth Route *Updated 10/19/13*

The last thing I saw was the Nurse was frantically doing heart compressions to get me to breathe. I don't even know where to start... First of all heart compressions will get nobody to start breathing again. That's why CPR is always performed in conjunction with artificial respiration of some kind....
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Oct 19, 2013 4:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking Shoujo: The Meth Route *Updated 8/7/14*
Replies: 53
Views: 23742

Re: Breaking Shoujo: The Meth Route

Actually, as I pointed out earlier, while the amount of money may be unbelievable, even more so is the fact that his parents are able to simply have Hisao pay all of it. First of all, they did pay for the hospital bills, so it's them who are in debt now. If you're in debt you can't simply hand those...