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No worries on the short comment. It did seem rather terse to me upon reading, but that's the danger online communications. I guess that happens a lot with my replies to fanfictions. That has several reasons: 1) I don't like to repeat what others already posted before me, so if you hadn't asked me s...

sg1cat wrote:I do hope you found the latest chapter enjoyable, in spite of your opinion on this matter.

Yes I did. I was on mobile earlier so I kept my comment short.
I liked the Back and forth between Hisao and Shizune as well. That part was very much like her

Ah, so it's Thursday afternoon and not Friday morning. Thanks for clearing that up.

Hisao goes to nurse in the morning instead of his run with Emi, then returns to his room and suddenly it'S 8PM... does't he have classes on Friday and what about his lunch with Emi?

You're right. Shizune IS showing him more affection than in the last few months combined. Makes her seem a bit ooc here...

I know you said in the intro that you would skip a few scenes, but you should still put some indication of where the time skip takes place in the story itself. As it is it looks like Hisao is going directly from the nurse back to his room to sleep. Also, did nurse know about the mystery girl? Otherw...

First of all Lilly's basically mocking Hanako for her relationship advices and then couples that with the suggestion — not even that — just the idea that Emi may be the one suited for Hisao. Outsch... Even if Hanako understands that Lilly didn't actually mean it and said it in the heat of the momen...

The characters are Japanese - why would they use stereotypical Australian phrases?

You know I never really saw the point in restricting yourself to a certain word count... But if you feel the need to explain your stories after they are finished, you clearly failed to explain enough in the story itself. Now, you could have let this story stand on its own and let the readers form th...

I mean, Hanako was twisting the knife there. I'm not sure why you would think that. Lilly herself encouraged her to pursue Hisao... Lilly laughs softly. "If you're saying that the way to Hisao's heart is to throw caution to the wind, perhaps Ibarazaki is his type after all." But that was a low blow...

we both know Shizune will just kill Hisao and I both

You know what me mean?

Congrats on finishing another one!

Halo is a nice story, but it doesn't seem to have a point. It's just five random minutes of a Hisao X Emi relationship. Fish is better in that regard, but it does have a few grammatical problems: The silence settled around them like a blanket, wrapping them in it's folds "its" They might have stood ...

bhtooefr wrote:Spoilerstuff...

Huh, you're right. I misremembered this...
Probably because I only fast forwarded through Lilly's bad end to get the 100% completion^^°

Lilly's bad ending doesn't have anything to do with the airport...

Sure it does.
Even in the bad end Hisao runs after Lilly to the airport and has his heart attack, doesn't he?

I don't think there is a rule against putting internal links into signatures.
Personally, I think a link to a sticky is a bit redundant, but I don't know who could have a problem with it.