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by Mirage_GSM
Tue Nov 19, 2013 4:07 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: New manga serial on deaf girl credits Katawa Shoujo
Replies: 12
Views: 5021

Re: New manga serial on deaf girl credits Katawa Shoujo

Well, the first chapter was well done, and it goes well as a one shot, but I have no idea why instead of continuing the story, she's retelling the story in an extended format. I have exactly zero motivation to read that, since I already know how it ends and it's probably just bulying from start to f...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Nov 17, 2013 4:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 25 up 11/15]

Granted I understand that Mirage's words count quite a bit, When I correct a bit of grammar, I'm usually pretty sure I'm correct. When I say I think something is OOC, that is just my opinion, which shouldn't count any more or less than any other opinion here on the forum except for those of the dev...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Nov 16, 2013 4:58 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 25 up 11/15]

but it does feel a bit dick moveish, like twisting the knife in both Lilly and Hanako, knowing full well what's happened with both of them I'm not quite sure what you mean by "What's happened with both of them." Are you saying that it would be dickish not to decide on Hanako because she had such a ...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Nov 15, 2013 7:50 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 25 up 11/15]

Well, if Lilly really does return, I wouldn't put it past Hisao to be beta enough to go back to her... I'd be really disappointed if you chose that path, though. All the conflict with Emi and Hanako you've built up so far would just fizzle and be for nothing^^° I don't really see why an Emi ending s...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Nov 15, 2013 7:21 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 100075

Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout

slowing from her frenetic pace to allow Misha and I to catch up with her. Misha and me [Well, this isn't the last thing I've got planned for our last day together,] ... [We have one more shop to visit before our dinner.] You know, it's a nice chapter, but you should consider having something happen...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Nov 12, 2013 9:53 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 162173

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 11/11]

What's with everyone trying to include a dream-scene as of late?
It's been a very long time since I've seen Blade Runner, so I'm not sure what the reference was...
Nice job introducing Mei and Ichiro.
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Nov 12, 2013 9:28 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beyond the Rain: (Hisao x Lilly) (18+) *Updated:11/11/13*
Replies: 21
Views: 10325

Re: Beyond the Rain: (Hisao x Lilly) (18+) *Updated:11/11/13

Having dreams of sight were terrifying. What? Hmm. A suicide attempt is kind of hard to swallow without any character development leading up to it. It's just a few weeks after she left, and iIrc they left on way better turns than in the VNs bad end. Trying to kill herself because of three weeks wit...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Nov 11, 2013 12:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC "Neko" - Route [reconsidered]
Replies: 123
Views: 28784

Re: OC "Neko" - Route [reconsidered]

Nothing said so far has made me think I chose the wrong word,...
Why do I even bother...

Okay, do whatever you want.
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Nov 11, 2013 11:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: OC "Neko" - Route [reconsidered]
Replies: 123
Views: 28784

Re: OC "Neko" - Route [reconsidered]

I specifically chose "baka" as a word that might actually not NEED translation -- I don't speak the language, but *I* knew the word from other sources What SC meant is that "baka" is not a swearword; it is an insult. You wouldn't call yourself a dumbass if you hit your head somewhere, would you? It...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Nov 11, 2013 9:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -23/09/14
Replies: 496
Views: 239266

Re: The Yamaku Library - The fan fiction archive -07/11/13

Generally, I listed an unfinished story as ongoing if it had been updated within five or six months of the creation of the entry here. Updating this list every time someone updates his story is WAY too much work to be done continuously. Also, I don't really see how knowing when a story was finished ...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Nov 11, 2013 9:13 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 24 up 11/10]

I may be confusing head-canon with events that actually occurred in the VN, but isn't Shizune aware of his condition because she has access to basic medical records for student council duties? ... Yeah, now that I think about it, I am pretty sure I pulled that from Tomorrow's Doom. Yes, that's from...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Nov 11, 2013 6:35 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332253

Re: Mean Time to Breakdown — (Iwanako, Divergence){u 10/20/2

I always took that to mean that Emi was trying to come up with the most ridiculous idea possible in response to Hisao's "not much of a club". It could also be a jab at Lilly, but I never thought there might actually be a tea club - or Lilly would be a member :-) Let's wait to see what Hivemind has t...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Nov 11, 2013 6:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Summer By The Sea [A sorta-sequel to Weekend at Hisao's]
Replies: 69
Views: 30416

Re: Summer By The Sea [A sorta-sequel to Weekend at Hisao's]

I didn't even consider the possibility she might be alive until you mentioned a "conversation"
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Nov 10, 2013 4:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 29776

Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (11/9)

a maremaid An unmarried female horse? ;-) I agree with the other posters here. For something called the "Karen-route" there's not enough Karen in here. Meeting Hisao twice and both times leaving without saying a word, she certainly is a very strange girl... And Hisao neglecting his pills - not out ...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Nov 10, 2013 3:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)
Replies: 57
Views: 16775

Re: Starbursts (Mutou and Miyagi) (UPDATED)

Well, with 12 classrooms and assuming four hours of English a week that would make 48 hours for a single teacher - assuming they teach only English. Here all teacher have to teach at least two subjects; some of my teachers taught up to four. Having only a single teacher per subject would also pose s...