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Fixed some formatting and wording and added the updated entry for Blackwaltz' story: [b][url=http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t=9067]After Graduation[/url][/b] - Route by [b]sg1cat[/b] (ongoing, wordcount pending) [b]PoV: [/b]Hisao; [b]Pairings: [/b]Hisao x Shizune; [b]Begins: [/b]after Shizune...

Word of God says Lilly leaves in every route but her own. Of course to write a fanfiction you always have to disregard canon to some extent, so it's no big deal. It's just something the reason for which could be explained briefly. (Of course, if Hisao didn't have much contact with Lilly, he might no...

Man, I wish people would post updates in more manageable chunks, but this one made up for it by being awesome. Now I know why the Prof didn't have time to continue writing his own story until now :-) Good to see you decided on a title for the story. The thread title is a bit misleading by now howeve...

The man gave the impression of very deeply wanting to say there was no catch (and indeed, there wasn't one as far as he was concerned

So having to fight murderous aliens is not a catch?

A bit... Why would they keep paperwork in an equipment shed anyway?

“Emi, don’t talk, just rest.”

What? No cooldown laps? ^_^

Otherwise a nice chapter. Good to see you back.

Hmm, actually, Lilly should be in Scotland at that point...

Shizune's not giving Misha and I a lot of choice.

"Misha and me"

In other news: Shizune is a bitch^^°

There are also Greater than the Sum and Katawa Kijo and iIrc a very old (pre-release) route called Broken Dolls that I really have to add to the library soon-ish...

No major grammar issues, but some stuff about the pacing caught my eye: Naomi's probably got a thing for you, man. Wow, that was quick... "Shut up Kun!" Interesting name ;-) I don't think it's in use in Japan, though. "We should probably head back to our classes," Did I miss a time-skip somewhere? H...

pretty much all of Shizune's route sees Misha suffering from [depression]. Well, there are many causes for depression. I don't know if calcium deficiency is among them. I'm pretty sure unrequited love is, though. Guess which cause I think is more likely for Misha. Besides, the day calcium deficienc...

Helbereth wrote:

Mirage_GSM wrote:Helbereth had fewer characters, introduced all but one of them beforehand and had a lot of stuff happening during the time they spent together.

Untrue. I had introduced all ten characters previously--Nobuo appeared during Tanabata, if only briefly.

I stand corrected.

As I said, I won't make a habit of it, because I am nowhere near as good as Helbereth at herding a lot of characters into a single space for extended periods. Helbereth had fewer characters, introduced all but one of them beforehand and had a lot of stuff happening during the time they spent togeth...

Also, are you intending to write branching paths? I'm ambivalent about the prospect, but I believe I know somebody here who will audibly facepalm if you do. I guess that will be me, though I don't know how audible it will be over the internet... There's not much I can add over what Leaty, Blackwalt...

Okay, that family tree almost scared me away from this "one-shot." You really like your large families, don't you? Makes it very exhausting to follow your stories, if you decide to give a damn. (I gave up giving a damn about the names here before I even started, so it was all right) By the way, did ...

Well, I hope their ready, is all.

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