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by Mirage_GSM
Sun Dec 08, 2013 1:52 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: "Fits of Many Varieties" New Chapter 12/9
Replies: 68
Views: 21329

Re: "Fits of Many Varieties" Updated (Minor) 12/5

Again I find myself wondering if I have missed a time skip - or even a complete chapter. I checked the entire thread three times, but I don't think I did. The start of this chapter is a completely confused jumble, and I have not the slightest idea what happened since the last chapter, where they are...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Dec 07, 2013 6:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Morning After
Replies: 16
Views: 6180

Re: The Morning After

That error got caught in the beta and didn't make it into the release version. If you remember reading about it, one of the devs probably mentioned it in the Ask-thread or something. Either that or you remember a fanfic. The reason for the lack of pet names might be that in Japanese "Anata" (you) is...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Dec 07, 2013 4:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Morning After
Replies: 16
Views: 6180

Re: The Morning After

Hmm, if they are still at Yamaku, I think it would be strange that Hanako would go to the bathroom in only her underwear. She has to cross the corridor to get there... But you wouldn't be the first to assume that each room has a bathroom attached. It even happened to Suriko ^_^ Apart from that I don...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Dec 06, 2013 6:08 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 29776

Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (11/19)

Hmm... It still sounds wrong to me... In this case I'd even say it changes the meaning: they’ll need a better man to figure them out than I. They need a better man to figure them out than I - meaning I could figure it out even with only the help of a worse man... It's probably one of those cases of ...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Dec 06, 2013 8:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (12/28)
Replies: 83
Views: 29776

Re: Growing Up - a Karen pseudo-route (11/19)

I'm actually not sure of the correct grammar here. In my head I make the sentence "They'll need a better man... than I (am)," which is why I used "I." Same principle as "She's a better driver than I (am)." Well, you can make that sentence in your head, but that doesn't help the reader, who cannot r...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Dec 06, 2013 4:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 30th Apr 2014)
Replies: 144
Views: 175494

Re: BlackWaltz's One-stop Oneshot Shop (New: 1st Dec)

As much as I wanted to believe I could write it sexually, I couldn't bring myself to do it. It didn't fit in the narrative and would have been pretty gratuitous. Most sex scenes are. Good for you to realize that in time. Hmm... I just realized that Hanako never really said how she felt about the wh...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Dec 05, 2013 4:55 pm
Forum: Blog posts
Topic: Katawa Shoujo 2 Cancelled
Replies: 116
Views: 81321

Re: Katawa Shoujo 2 Cancelled

The latter.
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Dec 05, 2013 2:43 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 100075

Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout

Hey, at least they were honest. Better than making up flimsy excuses.
At any rate it's something that slipped by us in the beta as well, so I won't throw stones :oops:
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Dec 05, 2013 3:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Word Association (OC) [Ch1 Dec 4, 2013]
Replies: 15
Views: 4627

Re: Word Association (OC) [Ch1 Dec 4, 2013]

I see a group of five students made up of two girls and two guys. Wait... 2+2=... I'm interested: What's the fifth? An alien? I sing and I can code. That's an... interesting hobby for a dyslexic... Not the singing of course. And is your Akira a boy or a girl? So far it's hard to tell. My gut feelin...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Dec 04, 2013 7:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Bad End) [Ch 27 up 12/4]

There were nights that I almost felt lucky that I hadn't been raped, or been asked to steal things for someone else – at least, not yet I'm not quite sure what kind of stuff you imagine happening in Japanese orphanages... it's still better to than having to enter the cafeteria. Great addition. I kn...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Dec 04, 2013 7:06 pm
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Limits of Fanfiction - What is appropriate?
Replies: 140
Views: 48658

Re: Limits of Fanfiction - What is appropriate?

Let me know if you do stuff like this; I never go to any part of the forums but the fanfiction section, so I didn't realize you were replying to me. Sorry. At least in Miki's case, I'd argue that she gets characterized in canon to at least five times the extent that Iwanako is. I might even argue t...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Dec 03, 2013 1:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K: MD Christmas Special
Replies: 70
Views: 20414

Re: Picking up the Pieces- A H&K Xmas Special (Updated 12/03

at the end of the day their usually too stupid
Found your favourite one ;-)
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Dec 02, 2013 3:49 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: Lilly's Secret Bad Ending
Replies: 16
Views: 9438

Re: Lilly's Secret Bad Ending

Haven't klicked the link, but it's probably either some bad joke or trolling.
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Dec 01, 2013 5:16 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Poll: What is the saddest good end ?
Replies: 23
Views: 7123

Re: Poll: What is the saddest good end ?

My vote for the saddest good end would be Lilly's. Holy shit. The one answer I did not expect anyone to defend, boom, right off the bat. I thought Lilly's good end was supposed to be the ultimate feelgood fairy-tale fantasy of lollipops and rainbows? (Not my accusation, but a common one) Well, lead...