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Okay, let's get the technical stuff out of the way first: He tends to call on the people why look confused Who. It might just me a little lie be. I began to focus on my class begin. I'm spending the night with a beautiful girl... That might be... a bit forward^^° Maybe "evening" would be less prone ...

Hoitash wrote:... considering how distanced Akira and her father are, Tatsuo mighta been afraid it would just upset Akira more.

Conidering the lack of empathy he's shown in the story I doubt that would have been a factor.
He certainly would have entered that argument to defend himself in the final confrontation.

griffon8 wrote:That said, I'm surprised you didn't bring up the kissing in public taboo, Mirage.

Well... Christmas Eve at the Aquarium?
I wouldn't call that "in public." Who else would go to the Aquarium on Christmas Eve?
It's more of a surprise that it would be open in the first place

I'd ask Hanako or Emi, but since it's you having written this story...

Nice one. That's still one movie I've yet to see...

"Hi, Hicchan~! Hi, Shicchan~!" You know up until this point I had a Shizune x Hanako ship in mind - probably because it would have fit perfectly as a continuation of that other Shizune x Hanako story... I was really disappointed when I read "Hicchan" :cry: Flying! To get to another part of the coun...

seemed relative to his recent turmoil. Yes, also relative, but related or relevant would probably be more common in this context. Miki had left a bottle of whiskey hidden among the coffee cups So I assume Shizune and Misha were among those "notably absent?" Great story so far, and I don't expect to...

Hanako as a gossip columnist? :| It feels a bit out of character for Hanako to do that. She'd be capable of it, but I think she'd have a specific complex about talking behind people's backs. Yes, that was my first thought as well when I read it... I don't think Hanako x Taro has ever been done befo...

I think we can skip the route warning for this one. From what I read so far you obviously know what you're doing, and it's certainly not your first time writing a larger piece of fiction. But while I also think Scissorlips' story is a good one (though it had a few lengths in the middle) I wish peopl...

Yes, a very nice story - even without any Illuminati or aliens :-) (the massive amounts of therapy she’d need in order to have anything resembling a normal, stable relationship. Now that’s a PTSD trigger I wouldn’t wish on my worst enemy.) Usually I would agree with you, but with the progress you de...

Nice to meet you too~ Mayochan! Mayochan? The way I read this, this was Misha's first time meeting Mrs. Hakamichi as well, or did I misinterpret it? “I transferred to Yamaku about halfway through the last year, It was about halfway through the first trimester. I also liked the story quite a bit, es...

I mostly went through the forums chronologically backwards, adding the newer ones first, plus a few I remembered as being very good.
There are still quite a few pre-release gems hidden there, and sooner or later, I'm going to add them as well. At the moment is not a good time for me, however...

How come Hisao gets uncomfortable in sudden intimate situations? Well, it's almost a philosophic question... Why do teenagers (and many adults) get uncomfortable in sudden intimate situations? If it was me, it would have been exactly what I wanted, and I wouldn't have let go of her for a long time....

2) Zombies allow the author to be lazy; no thinking hard the gnarly details, just *boom* *zombies!* No! No story does allow the author to be lazy about basic stuff like that. It's just that with zombie stories a surprising number of authors seem to think they can get away with it. There's a reason ...

Surviving after an apocalypse would be an interesting one,

For anyone who's actually thinking about this: Please consider Lucifer's Hammer by Larry Niven (of Ringworld fame) to be required reading!

"I...don't think I want to be alone...right now. C-could you...keep me company...for a while?"

Well, that sounds like it's going into "comfort" territory, which - if it happened under these circumsances - would most likely lead to a bad end for both Hanako and Emi...