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My goal was to give him an 'educated lower-class English' type of speech as, being just that myself, it makes it easier for me to decide what and how he would say things. If it's coming across as Australian, I'll need to have a rethink :P Well, I didn't immediately think of Australian, but the way ...

My goal was to give him an 'educated lower-class English' type of speech as, being just that myself, it makes it easier for me to decide what and how he would say things. If it's coming across as Australian, I'll need to have a rethink :P Well, I didn't immediately think of Australian, but the way ...

The interesting thing with all of that is that in Shizune's route, as of version 1.1, Lilly explicitly never actually permanently left, making it not a plot hole (and meaning that it's not an error in canon, either, so word of author would be wrong). What do you mean "as of version 1.1"? That scene...

I believe that until you regain your memory, we won’t be able to find any concrete evidence about your life before your accident. A boy of about 18 years going missing, and nobody reported him missing? No local papers reporting about the mysterious amnesiac boy who turned up in an accident? I hope ...

Mirage_GSM wrote:Well, the longer this goes on, the harder I find it to see this ending happily for any character.

I wrote this after the last chapter, and it seems this is proving me right.
If Lilly really comes back, I can't see Hisao ending up with either her or Hanako without the other being driven away...

Well, him and Hisao both, actually...

It is so "blatantly obvious" that even Hisao notices it only when it is almost too late, and he spends a lot more time with her than Nomiya.

Welcome to the forums! The story is looking very good so far. The wording is a bit awkward in a few places, and the tense should be past perfect in a few instances near the beginning, but no major complaints. Your description of Lilly's feelings about her parents' summons makes her a lot more likeab...

I have no idea what is wrong with your system, but for me both hitting the PM button under his Avatar and adding the name manually work fine.

I don't think he meant the Prof's route specifically...
That one's still ongoing either way.

Agreed. He's the overbearing father figure to Rin, pushing his own dreams onto her because he was never talented enough to achieve them. Well, he does it because he truly thinks this is for Rin's best as well, misguided though this conviction might be. It's not like he knows she'll have a breakdown...

I honestly felt the conversation in chapter five warranted Shiina hitting Hisao. Her clumsiness is demonstrated in front of them both, Hisao makes a remark which insults her intelligence, he hints that he could have had Shizune instead of her, jokes about her being fat, and then calls her by the na...

Reducing the font size to avoid line breaks is like pouring paint over your manuscript to hide spelling mistakes.
It kind of works, but it's not really the optimal solution...

- I'll buy the theory that Shiina's bisexual and not merely lesbian, since the VN never made that specifically clear. But I still don't really know how Hisao and Shiina got from where they were in the VN... Well, the story doesn't really fit after either of Shizune's endings, so I assumed this was ...

I'm not going to ask what you would consider to be NOT mildly NSFW.