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...and I changed the reason why Saki leaves Yamaku from the dean threatening expulsion to her dad pulling her out. Yes, I think that makes a lot more sense. Second reason is that Japanese schools often will do anything to make sure any negative event either with students, faculty etc that could or ...

“Until when, Hisao? You really think they’re going to let Saki stay here through graduation after this? She’s going to be on the next train down to Osaka! They might not even let her walk with the class in March!” Okay... I was already thinking they were making much ado about very little before thi...

They've assigned the same teacher the same class number every year? Seems strange, but maybe it's feasible at a small school like that.
Not much to say about the story so far from just the one chapter. I'll be following it.

You can see the kana for YA, SU and MI. Assuming the first character is an O (お) - and there's not really much else it could be* - it would mean "Good Night" *Okay and since I'm a bit bored right now: Disregarding the bit of the first character you can see, you could also use 冬, 春, 夏 or 秋 for the me...

In fact, now that I'm thinking about it, it could just add a whole other arc that I think about before.

And THAT'S a situation where a buffer will come in handy

One thing I did want to avoid, though, was having a foreign OC that was obsessed with Japanese culture, as I think that's another mistake that a lot of writers make. Indeed, many writers have their OC be a Japane nerd who has been learning the language as a hobby for years and wanted to go to Japan...

Okay, so let's get a few things out of the way first. First you should know that I'm known to be a bit nitpicky when criticising stories, so take everything I say with a grain of salt. Second using an OC - worse a foreign OC - is usually considered a bad sign when a new author shows up here, and it ...

“I’m holding Kimiko Shiina Hakamichi-Nakai,” The poor kid... I’d been adjusting to the idea of being a father for the past year and a half Wow, that was a REALLY long pregnancy :-) “Um, sakura saku?” I hesitantly offered the traditional congratulatory saying for folks who pass their exams. Really? ...

Welcome and good luck! One tip I always try to give new authors: I've got the story outlined, but I won't lie to you, what I've got posted here is all I've got written so far. ...Don't feel oblieged to immediately post any new chapter you've written. Try to keep a buffer of two or three chapters. Of...

While there are running prostheses for ATK amputees I think they would be at a severe disadvantage compares to a BTK amputee like Emi in a race. Also not sure if there were such prostheses ten years ago... Otherwise nice story. Not sure how it would tie into Avenues of Communication but it stands we...

Then nothing Hisao does after that actually counts as his behavior, according to this logic, No, it doesn't but since you seem to be either unable or unwilling to understand the point I was trying to make I see no reason to continue this discussion. You asked for feedback, but if you're not willing...

While Mutou taught in other classes, this was still his home room class.

Well, it was the classroom of class 3-3 of which Mutou happened to be the homeroom teacher. Not sure if you meant that...

Oddball told me not to view Hisao as an audience stand-in and that it was disrespectful to the character to do so, which I thought was actually a pretty fair point. Now you're telling me that his thoughts don't count as actual characterizations of him because they are "Meta" communications meant on...

Okay, first of all, in the Kenji ending Hisao is not "rejecting" other social interaction. Kenij is the only one to ask, so he decides to spend the time with him instead of staying cooped up in his room, which is arguably the more sociable of two options. Including the Meta, going around the festiva...

Yes, this was indeed a very interesting start (at least I hope it is a start of something...) I'M looking forward to finding out what exactly Hisao might have done to antagonize the school. Apart from the "staffed" there were quite a few more typos in there, e.g. but it's obviously she's recalling s...