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by Mirage_GSM
Sat Feb 01, 2014 11:24 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Meeting Lyle
Replies: 30
Views: 9092

Re: Meeting Lyle

You should only continue if YOU are interested.
Fishing for encouragement might earn you SC's ire.
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Feb 01, 2014 9:21 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
Replies: 80
Views: 30913

Re: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 6 2014-02-01)

Wow, I didn't know that it was possible for a professional chess player to lose so quickly...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Feb 01, 2014 4:18 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bad Hanako (Pt5, 20/2)
Replies: 46
Views: 15924

Re: Bad Hanako

About 'prettier than me/I', What about thoughts? Those are internal dialogue and quite similar to speech. You could make a case for that - and indeed many people are making the case that you can use it that way whereever - but I wouldn't use it that way in internal monologue either. The plan is for...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Jan 31, 2014 12:59 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bad Hanako (Pt5, 20/2)
Replies: 46
Views: 15924

Re: Bad Hanako

Okay, let's get the formalities out of the way first: I had do fill out a form for the student counsel council I cover my half my face a hand, Something mixed up here. Tempting me tales of her fine cooking” "with tales" Maybe he is just doing spending time with me she's much prettier than me Though ...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Jan 30, 2014 3:14 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 10 2014-02-08, complete)
Replies: 80
Views: 30913

Re: Enjoy The Silence (Ch. 4 2014-01-30)

Actually I didn't make the connection either (and if anyone else did, they didn't comment in this thread) because I forgot that Hisao met Akira in Shizune's route.
I'm probably still subconsciously denying Shizune and Lilly being cousins^^°
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Jan 30, 2014 9:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Whisky, Saki and Other Spirits- A Saki Story
Replies: 27
Views: 16947

Re: Whisky, Saki and Other Spirits- A Saki Story

Hmm. I thought i already put this in... apparently not^^°
It will be in my next update.
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Jan 29, 2014 5:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Half The Man I Was - Masato Nakamura
Replies: 7
Views: 2579

Re: Half The Man I Was - Masato Nakamura

You said he was put into 2-3, and both Suzu and Akio are (very likely) in that class. Remember that in Yamaku the classes are sorted roughly by disability, so it makes not much sense to shuffle them each year like Japanese schools usually do, since the blind and the deaf class are going to stay the ...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Jan 29, 2014 5:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369541

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 01/28/14 ~ C.43 - Mental Block

It's a moment of Aiko referring to her reflection as a separate entity - haven't you ever done that? Uh... No. I've always been pretty clear on how mirrors work ;-) I can see how Aiko might do it, though. Like I said, I wasn't sure if you did it intentionally. So, you've never gotten a call from so...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Jan 29, 2014 4:56 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Half The Man I Was - Masato Nakamura
Replies: 7
Views: 2579

Re: Half The Man I Was - Masato Nakamura

So as punishment for beating up a classmate he can stay home from classes for a week and gets transferred to the class all his friends are in?
Boy, this school is a delinquent's paradise ;-)
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Jan 29, 2014 11:03 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 04/30/16 ~ recommitted to completion.
Replies: 853
Views: 369541

Re: Tomorrow's Doom ~ Up: 01/28/14 ~ C.43 - Mental Block

11/06/13 This one always gets me. I always read this as June 6th first (smallest time unit to largest). If that dsoesn't make sense I read it as June 13th 2011 (largest time unit to smallest). Then I start guessuing which version you most likely meant. How anyone can find "middle/smallest/largest" ...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Jan 25, 2014 7:45 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S15 Updated 12/30/15)
Replies: 86
Views: 40384

Re: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S5 Update - 1/23/14)

For the additional kick, try themed chapter titles.
When I did this I first complied a huge list of possible titles and then chose one for each chapter I'd written.
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Jan 24, 2014 11:34 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Which ending(s) do you consider the worst?
Replies: 175
Views: 43359

Re: Which ending(s) do you consider the worst?

Hanako's neutral one is much worse. I see this one as a Hanako crushing down to the lowest level she can be on. She gets used to being treated as a porcelain doll, gets even more dependant on Lilly and Hisao, never goes out and makes friends, and as time goes by, it becomes even worse. Wow, that's ...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Jan 23, 2014 6:34 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S15 Updated 12/30/15)
Replies: 86
Views: 40384

Re: Staggering Harmony - (A2,S5 Update - 1/23/14)

Most of your story is present tense, but some lines slip into past tense: it was true, though I felt bad for saying it anyway. I'm not sure if the medicine has taken effect or not, but I felt like I was floating on air on the way down. We had arrived in front of an oriental style building, The insid...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Jan 23, 2014 3:46 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) [New chapter 1/22]

I fish it out and look at it, recalling my encounter with Noriko. The memory makes me recoil a bit, and I quickly drop the paper on my desk. I'm only calling that as an absolute last resort. I don't understand... Why would he even consider calling her? For relationship advice? I really like yoshi. ...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Jan 22, 2014 10:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 2015-4-1}
Replies: 862
Views: 332253

Re: Iwanako: Mean Time to Breakdown {updated 11/20/2013}

I sense some tempbans being handed out in the near future...