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by Mirage_GSM
Wed Feb 19, 2014 9:25 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Misha's disabillity?
Replies: 1050
Views: 291259

Re: Misha's disabillity?

It also means that we really can't take statements from Misha at face value, including statements like "I came to Yamaku to become a sign language interpreter." That's a bit far-fetched. You need some sort of motivation to tell a lie like that. With the stairs she want's Hisao to do something for h...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Feb 19, 2014 9:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 7/6]
Replies: 351
Views: 162173

Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 2/18]

“Half a million people from stairs? Really?” “I dunno. That sounds high, now that I think about it.” Probably a bit. This list quotes 1.307 deaths from falloing down stairs in the USA in 2000 with more than 7.000 "unspecified" falls of which a large portion could be stair related. This one lists 69...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Feb 19, 2014 7:27 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 34 up 2/

While I understand the sentiment, if you were in Lilly's position wouldn't YOU do everything you could to try to fix the life altering mistake you made? I would, even if I felt a bit bad about not giving my friend a fair shot. There are no 'dibs' or 'turns' when it comes to matters of the heart. Su...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Feb 18, 2014 1:13 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 34 up 2/

Thus do I land on Thrinacia. So Misha is... cattle? Helios? Shizune has warned him to stay away from her, because she thinks being around Emi is dangerous!" This is completely absurd. Emi's never hurt anybody in her life. Nope nope. It's probably just an excuse because she doesn't like Emi... Would...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun Feb 16, 2014 6:34 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Kenji Who? Part 3 - Feb 20, 2014
Replies: 14
Views: 5264

Re: Kenji Who?

A lot of the fiction on this site has the same plot line used again and again, just from different viewpoints and with different characters. And some would argue it's pointless. Reqading a story I know just from a different point of view is not really worth my while in most cases. Would you not wat...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Feb 14, 2014 5:45 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Forever Dreaming
Replies: 25
Views: 7873

Re: Forever Dreaming

How would the nurse know all that? Again, added a reason why she would know all of that. Fixed! Okay, let me rephrase that question: Why would all the information be in her medical file in a hospital in Japan? If her father hired a PI in the US to find out all those details, why would he tell the h...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Feb 14, 2014 5:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Avici
Replies: 12
Views: 5880

Re: Avici

Frankyo wrote:Interesting fic. Hanako is best demon. Please continue.
Haven't seen Beoran around in a long time. I don't think he visits the forums anymore...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Feb 14, 2014 2:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
Replies: 1140
Views: 572120

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 2/14)

Yamaku does use the regular Japanese school year, and the date when Hisao arrives in Yamaku is one of the things that is actually consistent through all paths. IIrc it is June 4th 2007 - which would be two months into the year and as Miki says quite late if transfers usually occur between school yea...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Feb 14, 2014 8:40 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Misha's disabillity?
Replies: 1050
Views: 291259

Re: Misha's disabillity?

What do we actually know? 1) She gets dizzy going up stairs No. She tells Hisao that she gets dizzy on stairs . There's a huge difference. I've pointed that out several times before, the last time just one page back :evil: 2) She inhales parfaits True, but not an indicator for any disability. 3) Sh...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Feb 14, 2014 8:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Forever Dreaming
Replies: 25
Views: 7873

Re: Forever Dreaming

''あなたは私を理解していますか?'' Is that something that google translate created? Because it seems way too formal for normal conversation. Also, I'm not 100% certain, but I'd use に instead of を there. I see a tube, connected to a machine on beside my bed, that goes deep in my throat. What? They left that in whe...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Feb 14, 2014 8:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Double Update 3/14)
Replies: 1140
Views: 572120

Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 2/14)

There's no classes today,... There's a few tests this next week... "Classes" and "tests" are both plural, so this needs to be "there are" in both cases. Transferred suddenly to Yamaku a few months before the end of the third year of schooling. More like "...a couple of weeks after the start of the....
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Feb 14, 2014 5:49 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Blind Spots: Theory of Colours
Replies: 9
Views: 3738

Re: Blind Spots: Theory of Colours

I do not understand why to us Japanese, blue and green — aoi — have been characterised as the same colour, but not to Westerners.
Not quite... The Japanese do have a word for green - midori - but the "border" between blue and green is different...
It's a bit complicated.
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Feb 13, 2014 8:02 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Misha's disabillity?
Replies: 1050
Views: 291259

Re: Misha's disabillity?

ADHD is not a disability, it's a psychiatric disorder (That's what the second "D" stands for).
Even if Misha had it, it wouldn't be a reason for her to attend Yamaku.
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Feb 13, 2014 6:57 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Interlude 3, 2/1

Remember, this is Yurimaku, where seven of the eleven girls in 3-3 (five if you don't count Hanako or Miki - but Naomi and Natsume bat for that team in damn near everything (especially things released by devs) outside of the VN, Ritsu apparently bats for that team in her source material, and Molly ...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Feb 13, 2014 6:18 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Interlude 3, 2/1

That's actually a very interesting story concept... I'd almost be tempted to try it, but I fear it would end up a tragedy, and I don't like writing those.
I wouldn't use Hanako by the way - there's another character who could be harmed more by the publication of her secret than Hanako ever could...