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by Mirage_GSM
Mon Mar 17, 2014 6:38 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Misha's disabillity?
Replies: 1050
Views: 291259

Re: Misha's disabillity?

Oh god, another one who read a list of Asperger symptoms on the internet and self-diagnosed himself . Please don't do that unless you have a few semesters of medicine under your belt! It is an insult to people who really suffer from that syndrome. As for the rest of your post: Misha getting dizzy on...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Mar 17, 2014 11:30 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
Replies: 124
Views: 47728

Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 3/17]

Shizune and Misha watched and cheered Miki and I on. "Miki and me " Which was just her way of leaving Molly and I alone in the room "Molly and me " Miki's trying to leave me all alone with Shizune. "Leave I all alone with Shizune..." Uh.. No, you got it right this time ;-) Nice chapter. I'm not sur...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Mar 15, 2014 1:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After The Dream—MAIN INDEX (and secret Hisao arc)
Replies: 165
Views: 148451

Re: Ruthenium: Hisao Vignette (AtD One-Shot)

Dokuta-Fu Every time I see one of these terms, I want to stab someone in the face with a salad fork. FFS just say 'Doctor Who', instead of either completely confusing your audience, or forcing them to Google something utterly inane and irrelevant. If I googled every term I encounter on the internet...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Mar 13, 2014 3:25 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
Replies: 124
Views: 47728

Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 3/13]

You know what?

I actually like your Shizune. It's probably the first fanfiction I read where that happened...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Mar 12, 2014 3:54 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Series of Short Stories
Replies: 14
Views: 5170

Re: A Series of Short Stories

We've... We've only been dating for a few years now! That's, that's hardly proper, Akira!" Says the girl who screwed him right after the confession :lol: Okay, in Lilly's good end, Akira should have left for Scotland, but I suppose she could have returned for her sister's birthday. However, while A...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Mar 12, 2014 3:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573208

Re: Yamaku Book Club

Personal pet peeve. I hate ellipses in fiction. Generally, ellipses are a vague substitute for the emotion or action the author actually intends. It's used instead of detail. It annoys the daylight out of me. You probably should stay away from my stories then, since I like to use them a lot. I agre...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Mar 11, 2014 1:24 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: The 'Wild Speculation About Rin's Past' Thread
Replies: 116
Views: 30119

Re: The 'Wild Speculation About Rin's Past' Thread

SpunkySix wrote:Rin forgot how to use tackle, and learned to use sketch!
Rin's special ability is sketch...
Relm's special ability is sketch...
They have to be related :!:

I wonder if anyone even knows Relm anymore - without googling..
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Mar 10, 2014 4:39 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Roles played
Replies: 5
Views: 2523

Re: Roles played

Misha helps herself to a couple m&m's SKITTLES! Oh my, this is going to involve some serious hack&slash, isn't it? Hmm, I can see Lilly putting forth the idea to support Hanako. I can even see Emi and Miki joining in - though not before being told about the concept... But Shizune is really out of p...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Mar 07, 2014 11:57 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reunion - A Hanako Bad Ending Epilogue
Replies: 15
Views: 5695

Re: Reunion - A Hanako Bad Ending Epilogue

For future reference: If additional information is needed for the reader to understand what is going on in the story, that explanation should go in the story. Your explanation doesn't really address the point I was making, though: You explained why Hanako finally initiated contact after 30 years, no...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Mar 07, 2014 6:05 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Reunion - A Hanako Bad Ending Epilogue
Replies: 15
Views: 5695

Re: Reunion - A Hanako Bad Ending Epilogue

It definitely has been a while, and things are a lot more different than what they were. If things are more different that implies there is another set of differences you are comparing this to... The truth is, Hanako, we loved you. And we were worried about you.” All in all the premise - all three ...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Mar 06, 2014 11:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 915
Views: 597595

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 3/6]

Akira, on the other hand, remains silent and calmly pulls the towel over her exposed torso, facing away from me while I nudge Emi out of the doorway before shutting it between us. ... “Six.” Akira remarks in a blank tone, the shock of the situation having already passed as she sits on the bed and d...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Mar 06, 2014 9:46 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Winter Update!
Replies: 198
Views: 75382

Re: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Lent Update

Did I miss the reason Lilly is on withdrawal or did you not provide any? She gave up caffeine for lent, I guess she was super addicted to it Hmm, I've heard of people renouncing meat or sweets during fasting time, but caffeine is a novel idea... Can you even get (physically) addicted to caffeine in...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Mar 05, 2014 5:51 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Winter Update!
Replies: 198
Views: 75382

Re: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Lent Update

“A lot of medical science based in homeopathic practice, and the proper proportions. Those two words do not belong into the same sentence :? By anychance were you referencing this picture? This picture is gold! So, this is a bit unusual for this series but certainly interesting. Did I miss the reas...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Mar 05, 2014 4:00 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Gray Outlook - A Hanako Epilogue
Replies: 5
Views: 2975

Re: Gray Outlook - A Hanako Epilogue

By 'more fatal,' I mean, Hisao is near crippled to the extent where he cannot do basic muscle movements. If you can come up with a different word for it, I will change it. "severe", "bad", "dire" (if you want something more flowery), ... I suggest using "severe." Fatal means that Hisao died. Full s...