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- Mon Mar 17, 2014 6:38 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: Misha's disabillity?
- Replies: 1050
- Views: 291259
Re: Misha's disabillity?
Oh god, another one who read a list of Asperger symptoms on the internet and self-diagnosed himself . Please don't do that unless you have a few semesters of medicine under your belt! It is an insult to people who really suffer from that syndrome. As for the rest of your post: Misha getting dizzy on...
- Mon Mar 17, 2014 11:30 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
- Replies: 124
- Views: 47728
Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 3/17]
Shizune and Misha watched and cheered Miki and I on. "Miki and me " Which was just her way of leaving Molly and I alone in the room "Molly and me " Miki's trying to leave me all alone with Shizune. "Leave I all alone with Shizune..." Uh.. No, you got it right this time ;-) Nice chapter. I'm not sur...
- Sat Mar 15, 2014 1:44 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: After The Dream—MAIN INDEX (and secret Hisao arc)
- Replies: 165
- Views: 148451
Re: Ruthenium: Hisao Vignette (AtD One-Shot)
Dokuta-Fu Every time I see one of these terms, I want to stab someone in the face with a salad fork. FFS just say 'Doctor Who', instead of either completely confusing your audience, or forcing them to Google something utterly inane and irrelevant. If I googled every term I encounter on the internet...
- Thu Mar 13, 2014 3:25 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 2/26]
- Replies: 124
- Views: 47728
Re: Breaking the Sound Barrier [Update: 3/13]
You know what?
I actually like your Shizune. It's probably the first fanfiction I read where that happened...
I actually like your Shizune. It's probably the first fanfiction I read where that happened...
- Wed Mar 12, 2014 3:54 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: A Series of Short Stories
- Replies: 14
- Views: 5170
Re: A Series of Short Stories
We've... We've only been dating for a few years now! That's, that's hardly proper, Akira!" Says the girl who screwed him right after the confession :lol: Okay, in Lilly's good end, Akira should have left for Scotland, but I suppose she could have returned for her sister's birthday. However, while A...
- Wed Mar 12, 2014 3:44 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
- Replies: 1945
- Views: 573208
Re: Yamaku Book Club
Personal pet peeve. I hate ellipses in fiction. Generally, ellipses are a vague substitute for the emotion or action the author actually intends. It's used instead of detail. It annoys the daylight out of me. You probably should stay away from my stories then, since I like to use them a lot. I agre...
- Tue Mar 11, 2014 1:24 pm
- Forum: Public Discussion
- Topic: The 'Wild Speculation About Rin's Past' Thread
- Replies: 116
- Views: 30119
Re: The 'Wild Speculation About Rin's Past' Thread
Rin's special ability is sketch...SpunkySix wrote:Rin forgot how to use tackle, and learned to use sketch!
Relm's special ability is sketch...
They have to be related
I wonder if anyone even knows Relm anymore - without googling..
- Mon Mar 10, 2014 4:39 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Roles played
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2523
Re: Roles played
Misha helps herself to a couple m&m's SKITTLES! Oh my, this is going to involve some serious hack&slash, isn't it? Hmm, I can see Lilly putting forth the idea to support Hanako. I can even see Emi and Miki joining in - though not before being told about the concept... But Shizune is really out of p...
- Fri Mar 07, 2014 11:57 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Reunion - A Hanako Bad Ending Epilogue
- Replies: 15
- Views: 5695
Re: Reunion - A Hanako Bad Ending Epilogue
For future reference: If additional information is needed for the reader to understand what is going on in the story, that explanation should go in the story. Your explanation doesn't really address the point I was making, though: You explained why Hanako finally initiated contact after 30 years, no...
- Fri Mar 07, 2014 6:05 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Reunion - A Hanako Bad Ending Epilogue
- Replies: 15
- Views: 5695
Re: Reunion - A Hanako Bad Ending Epilogue
It definitely has been a while, and things are a lot more different than what they were. If things are more different that implies there is another set of differences you are comparing this to... The truth is, Hanako, we loved you. And we were worried about you.” All in all the premise - all three ...
- Thu Mar 06, 2014 2:39 pm
- Forum: Feedback
- Topic: German Feedback - Rückmeldungen zur deutschen Übersetzung
- Replies: 76
- Views: 45277
- Thu Mar 06, 2014 11:17 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
- Replies: 915
- Views: 597595
Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Updated as of 3/6]
Akira, on the other hand, remains silent and calmly pulls the towel over her exposed torso, facing away from me while I nudge Emi out of the doorway before shutting it between us. ... “Six.” Akira remarks in a blank tone, the shock of the situation having already passed as she sits on the bed and d...
- Thu Mar 06, 2014 9:46 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Winter Update!
- Replies: 198
- Views: 75382
Re: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Lent Update
Did I miss the reason Lilly is on withdrawal or did you not provide any? She gave up caffeine for lent, I guess she was super addicted to it Hmm, I've heard of people renouncing meat or sweets during fasting time, but caffeine is a novel idea... Can you even get (physically) addicted to caffeine in...
- Wed Mar 05, 2014 5:51 pm
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Winter Update!
- Replies: 198
- Views: 75382
Re: Hisao and Kenji: Masterful One Shots! Lent Update
“A lot of medical science based in homeopathic practice, and the proper proportions. Those two words do not belong into the same sentence :? By anychance were you referencing this picture? This picture is gold! So, this is a bit unusual for this series but certainly interesting. Did I miss the reas...
- Wed Mar 05, 2014 4:00 am
- Forum: Fan Fiction
- Topic: Gray Outlook - A Hanako Epilogue
- Replies: 5
- Views: 2975
Re: Gray Outlook - A Hanako Epilogue
By 'more fatal,' I mean, Hisao is near crippled to the extent where he cannot do basic muscle movements. If you can come up with a different word for it, I will change it. "severe", "bad", "dire" (if you want something more flowery), ... I suggest using "severe." Fatal means that Hisao died. Full s...