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Heh, I was about to suggest that one to you ^_^

First of all let me congratulate you on your improvement regarding grammar and tenses. Regrettably the storytelling part went further down the drain. "She hasn't been that comfortable around guys since then", Ikuno said talking normally "but it's different with you and she wanted you to know about t...

I don't see why I should comment on a story here when it was just posted today^^°
I already commented on it in its own thread ^^°

Time related? How so?
The group she met in one story was different than the group she met in the other one.

Personally, I'd rather use "different from" or even "she met a different group", but if you want to use the t-word the third letter has to be "a"

Hanako and me immediately break apart "Hanako and I" Every time I have tried to use "all right", the grammar checker has flagged it and suggested "alright". I remember being taught way back when that "alright" isn't a valid word and one should always use "all right" That is still correct. "Alright"...

Comrade wrote:Anyone remembers what that Hanako X Shizune fic about chess is called?

The Most Surprising Thing.
It's going to be in my next library update.

When am I going to come out on top with this girl?

You know, he's really lucky Miki wasn't able to hear this thought...

Nice chapter again. Not only is your Shizune actually likeable, but your OC makes a better match for her than Hisao does

she would meet a different group of people then she did in USM.

Good bye... It was nice knowing you...

Oh wait, he said "If I have to correct!" Seems I just saved your life

but the intention appears to be leaving as many questions unanswered as possible Aura was pretty clear about his intentions in the introduction. I have to admit I forgot about this one. Thanks for reminding me. There's not much to be said about it, though. It's short, sweet and doesn't have any pro...

I'll read this later. For now I'll just note that on my monitor it is almost impossible for me to see the difference between the font colours you used. Not that I think it's neccessary to use different font colour - just saying.

I don't usually follow links to external fics, but since this one is quite short, and the feedback was so positive I made an exception. The first thing I noticed was: She screamed in agony until the heat had burnt her throat shut. That? In a confession letter ? I get that Hanako is a bit of a social...

In her big rooftop confession, Misha admits two things: that she didn't want to come to Yamaku at first, and that she was "exposed" about the fact that she didn't know sign language. The former implies a situation where going to Yamaku was presented to her before she elected to go there, and the la...

I remember that one. It wasn't really bad, but there were a few things that put me off: One was the cliché "The offspring are younger copies of their parents" trope, sharing even the same disabilities in some cases. Get a bit overused in this story. The other thing was probably intentional, but the ...

linkoid wrote:In the BETA version Misha talking to herself said that she lied and said she wanted to be a sign language teacher to get in

Didn't notice this when I was commenting yesterday, but:
There were no major changes to Misha's dialogue since the beta.

I did write a more detailed post yesterday, but it was lost when I hit send

Anyway, nice story as always. I probably didn't get all the references, since I don't know the movie, though...

I wonder how talking Japanese with a scottish accent would sound...