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Well, as I said I don't know exactly what studying for a teacher entails in Japan. I just wanted to suggest that it's probably not just learning a single subject in University. Regarding Toudai, doing "reasonably well" in your exams is not enough to get accepted there by a long shot. If you're at th...

I asked myself: "There are so many good fictions out there already. Are there anything that has not been covered? Can I fill in the gaps?" That's how I came up with this idea. I will write clearly in the intro that "the other parts of those stories do not apply". You know... "Filling in the gaps" a...

She doesn’t seem very phased though. Nor would I have expected her to be. Being fazed though might have been a possibility :-) We were sitting on a bench in the park, maybe four months ago, when he told me he liked me. I think we’d sent Takeshi and Suzu off for some food or something, and he just s...

Is "masterbating" some weird hybrid between "masturbating" and "masterbaiting"?

Hello and welcome to the Forums! Having read the first two chapters there's not much I can say so far except that from a technical standpoint they are pretty well-written. Regarding your introduction, a lot of those things should be self-evident, e.g. putting the speaker in a dialogue only when nece...

I would like feedback, in particular, about the pacing of events and whether the introduction succeeds in drawing in the reader. It begins slowly and with a number of seemingly irrelevancies. It is also intended to have reread value due to foreshadowing and references to the events ahead. Well... T...

I agree, this one was hilarious

Well, that's meta-knowledge and all, but I'm not sure I would consider any story revolving around Saki "hopeful"...
This one was a nice read anyway. A different take on Saki from what we are used to.

I actually disagree. I don't think Akira would be the kind to ask HIsao's teachers about him. She'd rely on her own judgement.
Still apart from the setup the story worked quite well.

I agree with the above posts.
It certainly feels as if you've put in a lot of effort.

Okay, now Hisao has done a complete 180 from the last chapter... Then he ran away from his friend Misha when she brought up the topic of marriage and children, and more or less internally vowed to avoid the problem for as long as possible, and in this chapter he proactively breaches that same topic ...

Hmm... I think this is actually the first story I've read in which Hisao is portrayed as reluctant to marry and have kids. It's not that I don't think it's a viable possibility, but in a pairing with Shizune I would have pegged Shizune to be more that type. What IS strange is that Shizune would neve...

Shizune's position, whilst i'd still argue as unrealistic considering Japan, is at least somewhat tied to the story, so i can look past that. Oh yes, I was going to comment on that as well but forgot: Reading the story it seems as if Shizune's already in a leadership position directing personnel wh...

Nice chapter again, but... Why does she even have a heart condition? She participates in swimming competitions, she carries her classmate up a hill without more of an ill effect than an increased heart rate (which is perfectly normal after an exertion like that) and doesn't seem affected by it in an...

After introducing myself, I start on my prepared lesson, Hmm... I'm wondering where you're going with this. When you started the setup with his first lesson I was expecting at least some of the students to become important for your story, but them you just skip the whole lesson without introducing ...