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I think if Mr. Satou does have a "trump card" it would probbaly be extremely hard to wrap this all up in one chapter.
Introducing the trump card, devising a way of countering it and implementing that way all in one chapter? I really hope not.

Wait... Hisao's status as "the boyfriend" was in doubt? Who else would he be if he was invited to all those family meetings. “I am aware of everything that is capable in Japan.” Looks like this sentence experienced editing problems. but what if the problem that she was trying to take care of wasn't ...

brythain wrote: However, Room 5-2 is fine (fifth floor, 2nd room).

Except I don't think Yamaku has five floors either...
I'd have to check the relevant passages in the VN, but it sounds wrong to me.

No, not random. You put all the actions and lines of one person in one paragraph and when the speaking/acting person changes you hit enter twice instead of once and begin a new paragraph. Example: “What do you want to do today?” I ponder a few moments on my thoughts with a large grin on my face. “We...

I knew this seemed familiar... but I was in a hurry this morning and didn't reread the thread.
Well, if a story contains the same mistakes I'm bound to find the same mistakes again, am I not?

Compared to most other stories of this nature - here and elsewhere - this one wasn't half bad. And that's about the extent of praise you can expect from me for such stories. I don't even think the way it happened was particularly unhealthy. Both have been in a relationship in all but name for some t...

Okay, first of all, try to use double spacing to make your text more readable - especially when you use a time-skip as you do several times in this chapter! Then there is a HUGE difference between ordinary nightmares and Sleep Paralysis . Even for the latter I don't think there is any risk of cardia...

Munchenhausen wrote:and also maintaining either a Second or Third person perspective. Something I'll have to read up on, really.

You mean First and Third. There's no second person perspective at all in this story - or anywhere on these forums iIrc...

A prime example of how length isn't important at all.
Very nice story, but I agree that you should replace all the "you" with ""she" or "her" as appropriate to keep the narrative mode more consistent.

No, there's no pre-story. All there is is Raita's sketch.

So all the endings are canon.

Maybe you should rephrase the question to "Which ending would you like to be the true ending if there was one?" since that's probably the question that most people are going to answer anyway^^°

Now I feel bad for presuming to fill in for you.

Scripts are against the license of the game, but as for "non-video let's plays", the closest thing I can think of is this.
I still recommend reading the VN though. It's not like it will take that much time.

I'm not sure why it should be rude. I don't know anything about your relationship status (nor am I terribly interested in it), and since you seemed to not be able to empathize with Emi's reactions at all, this seemed like a reasonable assumption. I never claimed this for a fact - just that I was won...

As for grammatical errors, I thought they were not really worth mentioning, but if you want to know what to look out for, I'd say the apostrophe is missing from a few Genitives, and the "s" from a few third person verbs. Also a few prepositions feel a bit awkward (i.e. "stumped with ") Nothing seems...

So much negativity it's honestly sickening. As posted above, it's not like i''m the only one who think Hanako and Iwakano. There are also plenty of people who think the moon landings were staged, airplanes spray mind-controlling drugs/weather controlling chemicals/poison (depending on which nutcase...