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I'm not quite sure what you wnt to do...
Are you planning a fanfiction or a Visual Novel?
Your OP says "fiction" but you wouldn't need songs or pictures for that.
And if it's going to be a fanfic, are you going to post it here or over at that other forum?

Nor have I ever forgotten the day that you refused to leave for Scotland with your mother and I.

...with your mother and me.

Other than that...

Congratulations on finishing this story. You've joined the elusive circle of writers who have actually completed a route

Aaaaand the momentum swings heavily in Hanako's favor. It might be wishful thinking on my part, but I don't think so... At the moment I see two major conflicts that need to be resolved: One between Hisao and Emi and one between Hanako and Lilly. This whole chapter Hisao spent most of his inner mono...

Can we please stop before this turns into an abortion debate?

Five out of nine symptoms are required for a diagnosis!

You know what else is required for a diagnosis?
Going to a psychiatrist instead of ticking off a checklist on the internet!

I was wondering why I don't remember this story, then I noticed it's not on the forums, so mystery solved. Well, it's nicely written for the most part. In the beginning a few things are overly dramaticized (fire-resistant trousers but no fire-resistant gloves? rubber gloves?) but nothing that sticks...

This, that's what I'm referencing.

"This" is a confirmation by the route's writer that this theory is rubbish, so why do you bring it up again?

Remember during Hanako's good end? How it focuses on the muffins? The condom was added because focusing on those made it seem that Hanako [is] pregnant at the end of her route Sorry, but that's bullshit. Or at least something you made up on the spot. There's nothing in the VN to imply that, no dev ...

I was glad that the writing was not in script format, as I have seen in many fan fictions. We discourage that pretty strongly here. I don't think any story in script format made it past chapter one here... it felt like too many characters being introduced at once. I was somewhat overwhelmed with th...

It would have been nicer if I could have gotten "the cake is a lie" out of my head, but that's only a criticism if it was intentional :wink:. I actually missed that one, but that means it wasn't intrusive at all, and thus I wouldn't comlain even if it had been intentional ;-) I agree with the gener...

Also, after watching both versions of Fullmetal Alchemist completely, I now can't get the idea that Mr. Satou looks like Van Hohenheim with red eyes out of my brain. That's... pretty close. Just cut off the beard and give him black hair and you're good to go. Although, I don't imagine him that "stu...

I gradually noticed Japan was... weird. Or, in a more direct way, perverted. As an internet denizen, I see a lot of anime-related content indirectly on gaming forums and such, and so often it seems that girls are treated quite unfairly. Always in skimpy clothing, being preyed on by weird guys, et c...

Vielen Dank!

The most crack pairing I ever tried myself at was Kenji X Shizune. It worked surprisingly well... In fact, that was probably the part of the story that worked best^^° Would you mind us covering it or no? Of course not. I know it's not my best piece of writing by far, so I won't be too hurt if every...

The most crack pairing I ever tried myself at was Kenji X Shizune.
It worked surprisingly well... In fact, that was probably the part of the story that worked best^^°