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by Mirage_GSM
Thu May 29, 2014 1:37 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Favor
Replies: 10
Views: 4217

Re: The Favor

I think the only thing that was supposed to have been a dream was the bit after that line.
There's still an empty pillow beside her...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu May 29, 2014 12:16 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573208

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Greater than the Sum)

An "upside down quotation mark" is used in several laguages (e.g. German) to open a quote, while the "regular" quotation mark is used to close it.
by Mirage_GSM
Wed May 28, 2014 3:30 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573208

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Greater than the Sum)

Math is hell, duh.
Math is the answer to Life, the Universe and Everything!*

*M(13)+A(1)+T(20)+H(8)
by Mirage_GSM
Wed May 28, 2014 3:26 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
Replies: 34
Views: 10025

Re: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]

The only reference I thought I got was the one to drug abuse, but that was apparently not intentional.

I know nothing about Dora the Explorer, except that people are paid to impersonate her in amusement parks.
by Mirage_GSM
Tue May 27, 2014 3:28 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Journey of a Non-otaku
Replies: 135
Views: 38003

Re: Journey of a Non-otaku

Munchenhausen wrote:I am sorry to say I sang that in Weird Al's voice
How do we not have a Lyric-Rewriting thread?
But we do!
At least one... Maybe more.

Edit:
Almost forgot my own...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue May 27, 2014 3:23 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
Replies: 34
Views: 10025

Re: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]

But I know the typical traditon of a visual novel is to dedicate 4 chapters to each girl...
You're talking about "Acts" rather than chapters.
by Mirage_GSM
Mon May 26, 2014 4:16 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Little More Like Yamaku
Replies: 12
Views: 4088

Re: A Little More Like Yamaku

the principle told the students You probably meant "principal"... and I'm pretty sure taking nails from a nailgun through the eyes would be fatal. Anyway, not many redeeming qualities about this fic. Pacing is non-existant, it's more like an extended summary or plot description than an actual story...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon May 26, 2014 4:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Steel [We're on the third chapter now!]
Replies: 34
Views: 10025

Re: Steel (We're on the third chapter now!)

"How's it going Tom? How's your day been?" Your character continues to talk to characters that have not been properly introduced. I toss Tom down on the ground Wut? By this time I started wondering if your OC is maybe suffering from severe hallucinations. I don't know whether what your character sa...
by Mirage_GSM
Mon May 26, 2014 12:23 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Ask!
Replies: 4980
Views: 1482617

Re: Sun Setting

I can personally attest to the sun setting quite early in northern Japan.
Part of it is the Latitude and the proximity to the eastern border of the time zone.
Also, they don't have DST.
by Mirage_GSM
Mon May 26, 2014 8:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Little More Like Yamaku
Replies: 12
Views: 4088

Re: A Little More Like Yamaku

the principle told the students You probably meant "principal"... and I'm pretty sure taking nails from a nailgun through the eyes would be fatal. Anyway, not many redeeming qualities about this fic. Pacing is non-existant, it's more like an extended summary or plot description than an actual story...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun May 25, 2014 6:27 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: So there's like, 6 main girls and maybe 3 or 4 side girls
Replies: 110
Views: 26446

Re: So there's like, 6 main girls and maybe 3 or 4 side girl

Let's say for a second that everybody here ends up at Yamaku.
Well, considering that most of the people here don't even speak Japanese and/or are way to old to go to High School there would certainly be a few problems... :roll:
by Mirage_GSM
Sun May 25, 2014 6:20 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A Birthday Wish (Saki/Rika) [Complete]
Replies: 35
Views: 18915

Re: A Birthday Wish (Saki/Rika) [Updated 5/25]

Nothing much I can add to what already has been said.
This story is fun despite the sometimes somber - or even morbid - themes.

It seems Hisao had his heart attack earlier in this alt-universe - not that it matters; it is an alt-universe ^_^
by Mirage_GSM
Sun May 25, 2014 4:04 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]
Replies: 915
Views: 597595

Re: Akira Pseudo-Route [Complete!]

Nor have I ever forgotten the day that you refused to leave for Scotland with your mother and I. ...with your mother and me. You've got to let it go dude. The "blank and I" versus "blank and me" usage is so minor that it's not considered a grammatical error by even the International Baccalaureate. ...
by Mirage_GSM
Sun May 25, 2014 4:01 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573208

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Closure)

Closure has always been one of my favourites. At the time it came out it was easily in my top three; with the multitude of good stories that appeared since it dropped a litte but is still in my top ten. It's been some time since I last read it, though, so I might misremember some details. Yes, it is...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat May 24, 2014 6:27 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: What if Iwanako transferred to Yamaku?
Replies: 54
Views: 16281

Re: What if Iwanako transferred to Yamaku?

No the letter is the same in every route.
And in this case I'd say the different times the letter arrives are not a screw-up but rather just the most convenient times for the letter to arrive in the respective routes.