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by Mirage_GSM
Fri Jun 06, 2014 11:10 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52890

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 6/5)

Layover; something to do with Sendai being a regional airport, I think. Being a private flight, Sarif can just go straight there. Travel time then, not flight time ;-) In my experience the rapid change in elevation hurts no matter what, but that might just be my ears. Well, I've flown a few times m...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Jun 05, 2014 2:47 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52890

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series (Updated 6/5)

it cuts the flight time in about half Why? Supersonic Jet? “Hisao Nakai, Hanako’s wife and Kenji’s partner. Wife? “Pleasure to meet you,” the man said, walking over and extending his hand. I raised an eyebrow at the proffered hand. Instead of flesh and bone the forearm and hand were black metal wit...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Jun 04, 2014 2:05 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Which ending do you consider to be the most canon?
Replies: 152
Views: 43065

Re: Which ending do you consider to be the most canon?

In definition, a 'gamemaker' would be the first heroine the MC is introduced to and ends the story with. Now it would be interesting to see how many VNs (or Anime, since VNs - like KS - usually don't have one canon ending) actually follow that formula... Kanon? No. Clannad? Yes. Tsukihime? No. Shuf...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Jun 04, 2014 10:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573208

Re: Yamaku Book Club (Now Reading: Greater than the Sum)

Well, let's say there are certainly more torturous stories around. I didn't reread it now, but I remember enjoying it when it came out. Yes, there are some things that could be improved when looking at it as a whole, but there is a noticeable improvement in the writing as the story goes on, and that...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Jun 03, 2014 6:05 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Which ending do you consider to be the most canon?
Replies: 152
Views: 43065

Re: Which ending do you consider to be the most canon?

My memory's kinda' fuzzy on when did Hisao crashed into Emi (or was it the other way around?). It's Shizune->Hanako->Lilly->Emi->Rin(?)

Or was it Shizune->Lilly->Hanako->Rin->Emi?
Neither.
By your definition (first words/signs exchanged) it would be Shizune->Lilly->Hanako->Emi->Rin
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Jun 03, 2014 5:58 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Katawa Kijo
Replies: 146
Views: 85681

Re: Katawa Kijo

Given that this story is over two years old I don't plan to do much editing for it - barring someone finding a typo. And since my goal was to see if I could write a good* story about the characters gaining superpowers (or in this case magic) it was not avoidable that it became what is by SC's defini...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Jun 03, 2014 1:12 pm
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Which ending do you consider to be the most canon?
Replies: 152
Views: 43065

Re: Which ending do you consider to be the most canon?

It was Shizune->Emi->Lilly->Hanako->Rin in that order of heroine introduction.
I have not the slightest idea what criteria you'd have to apply to arrive at that order ^^°
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Jun 03, 2014 2:47 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Which ending do you consider to be the most canon?
Replies: 152
Views: 43065

Re: Which ending do you consider to be the most canon?

Now THAT would actually be a "cannon" ending ;-)
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Jun 03, 2014 2:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: A few short stories
Replies: 37
Views: 20301

Re: A few short stories

I agree that this one was very good.
I know the game, but I think this story would have been even better if it had not been classified as a "crossover". That didn't do anything but distract from the story you told.
by Mirage_GSM
Mon Jun 02, 2014 9:11 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good route)
Replies: 237
Views: 100075

Re: After Graduation - A Shizune/Hisao story (post good rout

sg1cat wrote:Ugh...you'd think after several months of having that in my draft folder, I'd have caught all the typos... ;)

Thanks much, fixing now.. :-)
I'll take responsibility for missing that one. ^^°
by Mirage_GSM
Fri May 30, 2014 12:41 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52890

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series

Hoitash wrote:One thing I've learned driving in Michigan, at least, is that the speed limit sign is really more of a suggestion. One which people tend to ignore (especially where there are no cops, i.e, Detroit.)
Hey, Detroit has Robocop :-)
by Mirage_GSM
Fri May 30, 2014 3:56 am
Forum: Public Discussion
Topic: Why does Hisao only have a condom in 1 route? *SPOILERS*
Replies: 52
Views: 17552

Re: Why does Hisao only have a condom in 1 route? *SPOILERS*

Regarding Rin and the lack of birth control in her path... Could it be possible that Rin's been sterilized? Up until 1996 (according to Wikipedia) Japan's law made it possible to sterilize the disabled. As brythain said, extremely unlikely, but even if it were true it would not be an explanation fo...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri May 30, 2014 3:47 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Bugger It, Oneshot Thread (Morse Update 10/4/16)
Replies: 161
Views: 57807

Re: Bugger It, I'll Make This A Oneshot Thread (Updated 12/5

Also, this is a moderated forum, so you should post in a language the moderators can (easily) understand.
by Mirage_GSM
Fri May 30, 2014 3:44 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Developments (Post-Lilly NE) [Complete, 2015-08-11]
Replies: 1559
Views: 565951

Re: Developments (Post-Lilly Neutral End) - Chapter 41 up 5/

After being dumped and those weeks being wooed by two other girls?
I have no problems imagining that.

Remember the relationship itself didn't last even that long, so they've been apart longer than they've been together before that.
by Mirage_GSM
Thu May 29, 2014 1:53 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series Conclusion Update
Replies: 159
Views: 52890

Re: The Manila Tales –A Summer-ish Series

NIce to see you're picking up that character. I've always liker her.
How did she become so close to Miya, though? Did they even meet during the last story?