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I have to admit it took me some time to get back into the story, but when I did it was just as good as the previous chapters.
One (very minor) nitpick:
At one part you mention someone "regaining something back"

Thank you for continuing this story.

Using so many characters in the beginning makes it a bit hard to categorize the story. I think your story is on the Emi route, but he still joined the art club, and maintained good relations with both Lilly and Hanako and Shizune and Misha... A few parts were a bit hard to swallow or slightly out of...

Okay, that was a lot more positive than I expected ^^° There were actually two motivations for me to write this story: As I wrote in the thread I had the idea from this story when I saw the title of another fanfic on this board: V. day (Hanako) . At the time I'd ner heard the abbreviation "V-Day" fo...

I agree. This is very good writing.
I don't see what part is experimental yet, but I'm willing to be surprised.

Then it should be "the man whom our lives depend on"

The way you wrote it they are depending on the (several?) lives of the driver... Maybe hoping that he doesn't run out?

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Also: "their lives"

the man whose lives we were depending on.

I'm not quite sure, but I think you wanted to say something else...
Solid chapter again. GJ.

Righto ladies, gentlemen, and variations thereupon, our next story is a recommendation from the esteemable Mirage. ... I wouldn't call it a recommendation - in fact of all my stories this is the one I would recommend last for reading . Let's say it was a suggestion, because I think it offers plenty...

but when I first read it I got more of a "damning with faint praise" vibe Really? How so? It's true, there aren't as many pirst-person interpretations of Rin, but they are a lot harder to write than stories where she only appears as a side character, so I felt adding the distinction would not deval...

A similar project was proposed before and rejected by the devs. Generally, as long as you plan to do it only for personal use, noone's going to complain, but if you plan to publish it, the answer is probably going to be "no". It took me no more than an hour to create a file with all the lines for ma...

Why is Hisao saying that out loud? Why does Meiko reply like she gets the joke when she'd have to be a mind reader to understand the context?

So it seems I'm not a mind-reader either...
What's the joke she is supposed to get? Seems like a perfectly normal thing to say.

Emi sighs the sigh that people do You missed the chance to use "sigh" thrice in one sentence ;-) Seriously, this is one of the best (first-person) interpretations of Rin that I've read so far. My only complaint is that it doesn't really fit that well into this storyline with all the 4th wall breaki...

That would be the first suicide by crossbow that I have ever heard of

Yeah, the main point is that they wouldn't usually go to Yamaku with mental disorders. The school does accept non -disabled students (if they can pay the tuition), but the stuff you attribute to your characters would probably be considered a no-go. Paying the tuition would likely be another serious ...

Die Übersetzung geht nicht linear, einige Routen sind weiter als andere. Emis Route ist z.B. so gut wie fertig, Hanakos noch so gut wie gar nicht. Alle anderen sind irgendwo dazwischen.
Ich würde schätzen, dass insgesamt etwas mehr als ein Drittel übersetzt ist.

I'll be frank and admit that I didn't like this story very much. Not the technical side - that one was actually quite good if I recall correctly - no, it was simply a story I did not enjoy reading, and there are two main reasons for that: 1. Rika was so unlikeable that I was actually hoping for Hisa...