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by Mirage_GSM
Thu Aug 29, 2019 11:24 am
Forum: Fan Works
Topic: YouTube - Voice Acting/Let's Play
Replies: 6
Views: 5980

Re: YouTube - Voice Acting/Let's Play

I think there are plenty of people who did that.
Personally I don't see the point. Youtube will by neccessity have a worse quality than the original, and you can't go through at your own pace.
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Aug 29, 2019 11:17 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Yamaku Book Club (20220124 Dish Washing)
Replies: 1945
Views: 573157

Re: Yamaku Book Club (20190826 CplCrud on Hanako)

Future: That one was... not really good. I can see why it was not included in the VN. Also it would have needed a whole lot of new backgounds and sprites, so there wasn't any chance of it making it into the VN in the first place. 10th of July: I remember having read that one before somewhere. It's ...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Aug 29, 2019 10:40 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Completed 12 Sep 2019)
Replies: 38
Views: 10653

Re: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Updated 29 Aug 2019)

It turned out that Iwanako narrowly beat us this year, so we both lost. Did you just nonchalantly skip a whole year here? {Well, then we’ll need to make sure we stay as healthy as possible in order to decrease the odds of that happening.} {How?} {For one thing, my deafness cannot be helped. So, on ...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Aug 29, 2019 9:51 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Feurox's Den of Sadness [04/26/2020]
Replies: 96
Views: 32017

Re: Time is Dancing and Other Stories [08/28/2019]

A very sad yet also very well-written story. Thank you for writing it! Personally I've always preferred Lelouch over the no-name guy who replaced him. He's just one of at least four cameo characters, and I don't really understand why he fit in less than the others. Also an aphasic character is fasci...
by Mirage_GSM
Thu Aug 29, 2019 8:59 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Shiina 3
Replies: 3
Views: 2294

Re: Shiina 3

Just a technicality, but "Han-chan" would not work - because of how the Japanese syllables work: Hanako is made up of Ha, Na and Ko, not of Ha, N, A and Ko, (an that is because the syllable "N" can only be used at the end of words, never in the middle), and you can't simply cut a syllable in two wit...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Aug 27, 2019 3:19 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Da Capo
Replies: 7
Views: 2449

Re: Da Capo

As far as starting in the middle, that wasn't my original plan, the notes right before this scene in the notebook put it as a "close to end scene," but it was one of, if not the, first scene that I felt was finished and it just kind of morphed into the beginning when I decided that I really liked i...
by Mirage_GSM
Wed Aug 21, 2019 5:39 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Da Capo
Replies: 7
Views: 2449

Re: Da Capo

Wow, that was really good. For I while I was thinking it might be Miki, but you made it an OC - which is fine. Time Loop stories are always some of my favourites.. if the author can pull them off right, but so far you've done great on that count. Starting right in the middle kept the pace up, but yo...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Aug 20, 2019 12:44 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-13 added 27-02-2022
Replies: 57
Views: 25693

Re: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-1 added 08-19-2019

I don't write a scene after someone told me to do something. I should do it, it may be better, I don't know. As a general rule you should not write any scene just because one of your readers tells you to. You're the one who knows your story and where you want it to go. A reader can tell you what di...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Aug 20, 2019 12:22 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Completed 12 Sep 2019)
Replies: 38
Views: 10653

Re: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation)

Oh, you had new chapter as well... Okay. Her hands. Her hands are doing the talking. If I grab her hands, she cannot “say” anything. That will hopefully calm her down. So. This is the branch where Hisao has eaten the idiot cake. :shock: I can tell this is going to go badly without reading a line fur...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Aug 20, 2019 12:04 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Completed 12 Sep 2019)
Replies: 38
Views: 10653

Re: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation)

Are you talking about the references? I just don't want to fall into plagiarism. Plagiarism? :lol: Most of that references come up in so many stories that nobody'd know which of the half a dozen possible stories - if any - you took the inspiration from. Decision of...?? Making Iwanako in Todai? Dec...
by Mirage_GSM
Tue Aug 20, 2019 11:42 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-13 added 27-02-2022
Replies: 57
Views: 25693

Re: Beyond The Haze : A Lilly pseudo-route - II-1 added 08-19-2019

, and I lay down on my bed. "I lie down." Lay is past tense. I don't have any good news for you. He doesn't seem to have any kind of news... I have to draw some lessons from that, and I begin to understand why he asked me to never swim fast. If she's not allowed to, who the heck signed her up for a...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Aug 17, 2019 8:36 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route [Updated 8/17/19]
Replies: 24
Views: 10023

Re: Respice Adspice Prospice - A Misaki Kawana Pseudo Route [Updated 8/17/19]

Couple of typos here and there; I'm going to focus on the grammar-related ones: it looks like it's time for Nurse to enquire on to my mental health. enquire about She storms over to Lezard, slamming her palms down on his desk. That has to be painful for someone with CT... The message on it reading. ...
by Mirage_GSM
Sat Aug 17, 2019 6:48 pm
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NuclearStudent's Cursed Zone
Replies: 46
Views: 14572

Re: NuclearStudent's Story Repository

Mutou returning was not meant to be such a mood breaker. Mm. I made no attempt to imitate Suriko's writing style or put this as anything other than a reflection of my own wishes, but I was quite serious in that part. I'll mull on it. Okay, then let me elaborate on why I thought this was a crackfic:...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Aug 16, 2019 5:55 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: NuclearStudent's Cursed Zone
Replies: 46
Views: 14572

Re: NuclearStudent's Story Repository

Well, first of all: Who's Yuriko? Apart from that the biggest problem I had with the story was the sexual innuendo at the start. It does not mesh well with the rest of the story. At the start I was expecting this to be a crackfic, then suddenly it turned completely serious - which was jarring. And t...
by Mirage_GSM
Fri Aug 16, 2019 5:38 am
Forum: Fan Fiction
Topic: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation) (Completed 12 Sep 2019)
Replies: 38
Views: 10653

Re: Maturity - Shizune Epilogue (A continuation of After Graduation)

"I will not influence your decision, but... and... and... and... Didn't convince you yet? Okay, I'll try again later." :lol: your immunity system immune system Can’t you be a bit more considerate to those around you? considerate of... As for the end... Well, that escalated quickly... A bit too quick...