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That was...dense. I had a very difficult time reading that, given the lack of spacing and the fact that it was almost entirely Misha monologuing. Usually I would agree with you, but I thought in this story it actually worked. The lack of spacing reinforces the feeling of Misha gushing like a waterf...

I was going to comment that most mothers lose their "heavy sleeper" disadvantage (perk?) by default.
If you want to fix it, just remove the "always has been" from the story, but it's not really neccessary.

Seems you posted the first part two times... as for history I can allow you to redo all the test at the time of your choosing. Wow, do they allow you to do that where you come from? 'Cause they certainly don't here... Or is that supposed to be a Yamaku-only perk? Oh how I dread the subject, when wou...

The nurse is in the Auxiliary building which is next to the main building with the classrooms. That much is said in the VN, and I think it even mentions a connection between the two at one point. Beyond that nothing has been made available by the devs yet.

There's PLENTY to pull from the forums.
Not sure if the Cook would mind, but I for one don't go to ff.net.

I agree with Leaty: Very to the point and concise.
I like it a lot.

Pool is okay - it's mostly geometry and physics, which I'm better at than quick reactions

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Short. Sweet.
I wish I could play ping pong even half as well as Hee... I'm lucky if I get the ball back across the net once.

So they're leaving Natsume behind? How mean

My nervous behaviour has resurfaced, this time with a reckoning. I'm not familiar with this figure of speech... Do you mean "with a vengeance"? I don't know what business her and Yuuto had "She and Yuuto" and are welcomed by an expected site-Yuuto. ... That would be quite the site sight - both time...

Basically I second everything Guest Poster said. I don't mind honorifics in general, but the way they were used in this chapter was just... weird. It just sounded like Emi getting kinky, and even after your explanation I'm not sure if that was still supposed to be part of the parody. Hisao having a ...

Uh... yes, that devolved quickly ^^° I was just about to compliment you on the first chapter and then this... Oh well, one general piece of advice I wanted to give before I read chapter two was to suggest you don't post every chapter as soon as you've finished writing. Build up a buffer of two or th...

Dad’s gonna move their too eventually It's not me/I this time. Progress? Lynda snorted and part Hideaki’s head patted? Rest assured that if anything happens to me, I have arranged for Helbereth to receive my hard drive, so he may continue where we left off. That is comforting at least. Nice chapter...

If that's what you think please talk about it in another topic. This one is exclusively for the devs to answer questions (or for others to provide links to answers the devs already gave in other threads). The answer to that question is that there isn't one. The fate of Shizune's mother has not been ...

The girl gives a resignated shrug resigned As for you're friend~...Nori was it?” your I feel as though I'm eavesdropping on it, which I suppose I do? Goodluck getting his attention though, it's only his first day and he's already being carted around by the student council.” Hisao's first day is a M...