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It is always funny (and by that I mean not) how people always try to diagnose Rin with some mental disorder based on "someone they know" or "something they read on the internet". Hey, could Rin have "A"? No, it's more like "B"! No, I'm certain it has to be "C", because [insert random reasoning that ...

Nice scene. It had dawned on me that I had never been in his room before. And now, I'm here with little more than a vague purpose. Personally I think present tense is more suited to first person narration, but using past tense is fine as well. You can't use phrases like "and now I'm here" , though...

Remember his heart acted up from throwing a few balls at some tin-cans during the festival

I don't know if you realized, but 'Hanako' is the name of a female toilet ghost that haunts the furthest stall of the girl's toilet. Commonly 'found' in junior schools. So her using the 'mystery girl toilet' is Rin poking fun at her name--I know I did that to a friend of mine way back in middle sch...

"I don't have to," she says. "I've already done my rounds. I just need to cool down and I'm done with my morning workout." If she did her routine, but has not cooled down yet, why did he meet her in front of the dorms? I amble along at a snail's pace, and as I finish my first lap I can already feel...

I'm not sure if you're really replying to my post, because I never said a word about what you would have done. I simply pointed out the differences between such an encounter in real life and reading about it in a VN. If you say you would have understood her instantly, who am I to argue against that....

Hindsight doesn't come into play here since this is the things I thought while I played it through the first time and reading his responses to her... Even if you disregard all the hindsight stuff you had the luxury of reading all of this. You could pause whenever you wanted to pore over what Rin sa...

besides, in German, everything sounds like yelling. That's not true. And I can prove it: Im Rosenbusch die Liebe schlief, Der Frühling kam, der Frühling rief; Die Liebe hört’s, die Lieb’ erwacht, Schaut aus der Knosp’ hervor und lacht, Und denkt, zu zeitig möchte’s halt sein, Und schläft drum ruhig...

Hey, nobody get's paid here - not even the devs

Besides I don't think I ever yelled at anyone...

"Sorry!" She finally lets me go as we both stand over her. "I didn't know who else to turn to, and you were the closest dude I could find that I can trust. Something is wrong about the sequence of events here: Class is dismissed. Hisao finishes his notes. It can't take too long, since Shizune and M...

Okay, not bad for a first story. Quite a few problems with tenses and Homophones. I won't list them all here, but I suggest you find a proofreader/editor. Several people around here will be able to help you if you ask nicely. "Sarizon" is not really a Japanese name, and it feels strange to read it. ...

he is essentially someone that Hisao only met very recently, and he has no info on her whatsoever aside from her being his classmate. That's a given, but he spends most of the day with her (he gets up around noon, meets her until an hour later and stays with her until after sundown. That's probably...

Maybe you should think of a title for the story and rename the thread accordingly. "Yet another Miki-Pseudo-Route" is not exactly inspiring confidence... The writing is a bit rough, but I think most of that can be fixed once you get the tenses right. You're jumping between past and present tense a l...

Regarding the classes, this has always confused me about the VN. I know that japanese classes don't all take place in one classroom for the day and instead switch around, however in the VN I seem to remember there being instances where the class let out to lunch, or got back from lunch, or let out ...

I was just now going to search for an appropriate thread to post this link. Thanks for saving me the trouble

I also found the article to be very interesting, especially the tidbits about braille.